English Paper

[007jello]

hey everyone. Well i finished my paper finally and here it is. cause my coumpter is stupid it isnt spell checked so im doing that tomorrow morning at school. so just let me know what ya'll think of it.

Personal Narrative Paper

For anyother person this day would be the same as any other morning, with the alarm startling sound cause the warm,

Comments

[s4mur41m0053]

Your opening sentence isn't clear - I couldn't get what you were trying to say.

Numa Numa is not a band, the band is called O-Zone, if you were wondering.

Your interest and passion for the theatrical underground is very apparent from reading this.

Many of your sentences, it seems, could be condensed somewhat to be more direct.

Oh, and I wish your spell check program luck. ;P

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[007jello]

ah...thank you thank you thank you. i tiook it to school and spell checked it and edited it a little. thanks for taking the time to read it. there is another copy due friday so i have a chance to fix it. r u like school up there? and i let you know how the paper goes.

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[s4mur41m0053]

School is going well. Contact me at SamuraiMoose104 on IM and I'll tell you.

I'm responding to this to let you know that I've heard about something that may interest you. See, I subscribe to a theatre-related email newsletter, and they were talking about some excellent undergraduate theatre programmes that are often overlooked. (I assume this is what you are doing... I think you mentioned this during OOTI.) The three schools they mentioned were University of Washington, Northern Illinois University, and Cornish College of the Arts. So you may want to look at those. McGill, on the other hand, as excellent as its programmes are, really doesn't have much of a theatre program. Of course, that's wonderful for my chances of making productions... I have a callback Saturday.

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[007jello]

ah good luck i hope think go well! break a leg. i actually am looking at washington University though its kinda low on my list . whats the maganzine called?