[.a beginning of a snippet of something that was supposed to be something else.]

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"I'm not going to keep on making excuses for you," he hears Freddy say. He hears him, but doesn't move, doesn't even open his eyes. James just lays on the bed with his hands behind his head, listening to the battered walkman he and Freddy share

Comments

[darkmike]

Randomly, your 'frustrated' mood icon is brilliant. *applause*

And notsorandomly, I like the snippet. It's short but...to the point. It lets the reader see a lot more in short words than most people manage in a whole giant chapter.

[0100111]

Ahaha, isn't it?

It lets the reader see a lot more in short words than most people manage in a whole giant chapter.
Oh wow. Cool. Thanks. :)