Comments | 0100111: Meanwhile in a beach house down the Cape...

0100111

Meanwhile in a beach house down the Cape...

Jun 09, 2005 03:54

Not quite a sequel to this, but takes place in the same universe. I'm not done with these people.

( ...a little more like honey in color and consistency... )

Comments 4

human_celluloid June 9 2005, 17:03:03 UTC

Nice. I looked at it and was disappointed with the lack of dialogue (which I loved from the first piece).

But it works much better that way; not knowing what they're whispering about. I particularly liked the image of their skin colours appearing to be of the same tone under sunlight.

That final paragraph I relate to very much, how all bodies fit well together but at the time it's only one person who can.

0100111 June 14 2005, 20:16:13 UTC

Thanks very much, man. I appreciate the feedback.

anjali_organna June 17 2005, 22:39:44 UTC

She used to say to Doug, "I love how our bodies fit so well," but, she reckoned, it seems like every body fits well with any other. Eternal happiness would seem then to come not from destiny, but choice.

So, so true. Like the other piece, I love the realism of this. Also, the sadness that's floating around the edges.

0100111 June 17 2005, 23:02:12 UTC

Thanks man. Yeah, I'm definitely not done with these people.