July Week 1 Entry

Jul 02, 2008 21:26

The day I left you, I sat and I waited ( Read more... )

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musicrocks987 July 3 2008, 17:44:41 UTC
Awesome!
Kept my interesting the entire time to see what would come next.
Fantastic use of words, and writing style!

Best Of Luck!

OoO~Stuck in the Stars~OoO

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sweetpixiechild July 4 2008, 21:40:18 UTC
Damn.
I have some serious stiff competition. Haha. I'm so screwed. Lmao!
Amazing, what I loved about this was you took the prompt in a different direction. The word heavy seems to send people in different directions doesn't it? I do love your writing style... it makes ME hate them.

Good luck!!

Pix

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wierdauntie July 5 2008, 03:22:24 UTC
gave me a chill. The bastard!

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urael July 5 2008, 03:43:17 UTC
Very nice, very nice indeed.

Okay, "nice" is probably not the best word. Well done, how about? :-)

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worldofcharlie July 5 2008, 20:27:42 UTC
I really wanted to know more..

This is nicely intense...

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