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L.I.P.S ; Jongtae
R, very failed smut. probably really graphic.
A/N: Was listening to Jasmine's L.I.P.S and got very inspired. I've just read this and i felt shitty. Her smut standard is like woah! Im still learning since its not long ago that i actually started writing. probably there are alot of spelling mistakes and im sure a lot of repeated ( Read more... )
R, very failed smut. probably really graphic.
A/N: Was listening to Jasmine's L.I.P.S and got very inspired. I've just read this and i felt shitty. Her smut standard is like woah! Im still learning since its not long ago that i actually started writing. probably there are alot of spelling mistakes and im sure a lot of repeated ( Read more... )
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HWOT!
I read this fic at my art class and wow.. O.o
hot hot.. XD
SO SO.
I see a hint 2min.
Would you make a 2min version? XD
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Thanks for reading, though its kinda bad.
a sequel? i can, if i have more time. =)
(p.s, did no one catch you reading smut?)
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Bad? This is good and hot!
Really I like it so so much.
Lol my pervie mind..
Omo I hope you'll write the 2min side!
I'll be waiting for it! XD
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I'm not too crazy about JongKey, but the way Key was just really cool about it and not even surprised was awesome. I kind of wish Key would corrupt Taeminnie, too.
AND OMG, MINHO-LURKER.
He should totally go and claim Taemin. SEQUEL PLEASE, WITH A REAL HORNY MINHO. xD
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Taemin has this really clean boy image, and then here come Jonhyun prattling along and corrupting his mind. LOL
yea, maybe key should join in the fun too =x
i'll consider a sequel, but my smut skills isn't really up to it yet. lol!
but still, thank you for commenting bb!<3
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