Fic: The Coming of Arthur: An Interlude (6/6), for lolryne ♥

[0corona0]

Title: The Coming of Arthur: An Interlude (6/6)
Rating: R
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur, established relationship, but Arthur knows nothing of Merlin's magic
Summary: What happens after the last scene of 3.12.
Warnings: violence, angst, spoilers for Merlin 3.12
Disclaimer: I disclaim.
Author's Notes: This gift for lolryne is supposed to ease her waiting for

Comments

[timetraveller90]

OMG This was a perfect way to end this prelude to the final episode

You really wrote them well all along the different chapters, so in chracters.

Plus I really love the way you wrote Arthur and how he's reacting to all of this especially about the magic reveal.

I may come back after re-reading all of it again and give you amore detailed feedback. I'm a bit in a hurry just now but I really loved your story !

[0corona0]

First of all: Sorry that I haven't replied until now, after the finale I got practically buried under the word I'd put off during the previous week in favour of writing the fanfic!

Well, and then: THANK YOU! :D You have been so great about giving feedback, and always such good feedback too. It was much easier to write and edit the chapters at 11:30 at night after work knowing that it would put a smile on your face to read it! If you ever want to come back and leave more detailed feedback, of course you'd be more than welcome to, but you've done so, so much already! :-*

[mjls]

YAY WHAT A GREAT ENDING
EEEH

[0corona0]

First of all: Sorry that I haven't replied until now, after the finale I got practically buried under the word I'd put off during the previous week in favour of writing the fic!

And, more importantly: Thank you very much! :D I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

(btw, your icon is great! you hink Merlin would be a fic-reader ...? ;))

[ayalleda]

Wow...if only this would happen!

I love the growing realisation of just how powerful Merlin is and just wish we'd get to see more of that in the show

[0corona0]

First of all: Sorry that I haven't replied until now, after the finale I got practically buried under the word I'd put off during the previous week in favour of writing the fic!

Yeah, I know, but I guess it was too much to ask for (don't get me wrong though, I thought 3.13 was great!).

I KNOW! I'm such a sucker for BAMF!Merlin. I mean, we're talking about the most powerful sorcerer of all time here, the wizard who inspired the creation of all the others. I want to see him do some powerful magic on the show, too, not just throwing people around randomly.

Thank you so much for your comment! :)

[archaeologist_d]

I loved how Arthur came around to what he needed to recognize, that Merlin had no choice in the matter. I loved the tenderness that he showed and how Merlin pledged himself to Arthur. Well done.

[0corona0]

First of all: Sorry that I haven't replied until now, after the finale I got practically buried under the word I'd put off during the previous week in favour of writing the fic!

But more importanly: Thank you so, so much! You named all the things that were veryy important to me while I was writing, especially Merlin's pledge (that one was a bitch -- still feel I didn't get it perfectly right ;)).

[0corona0]

Haha, best feedback you could give! Thank you so much! :)