This was a great start to what is definitely gonna be a great fic. It made me giggle - He doesn’t know about bowling balls, but he’s pretty damn sure he’s going to have a set of blue balls before the night is over. and “Why don’t we be up together?” I love those lines. And Greg jacking off while thinking of Nick? HOTT!!!
sorry it took me so long to get over here and say something. but this fic is really great. Not that it changed much from the original version, but I love the little change you made. gave the story a nice flow. I can't wait to see what the rest of this turns out like.
wow. i am so glad i stumbled across your journal. i am so in love with your fics and you! hehe. this was so good. im usually not into AU's but this one was just perfect. im glad i dont have to wait around for the rest ;)
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i am so in love with your fics and you! hehe.
this was so good. im usually not into AU's but this one was just perfect. im glad i dont have to wait around for the rest ;)
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