ok, so I said this about five minutes ago on your other fic, but this might be the best part. Such cute domestic stuff. i love, love, love, the ramifications of having sex in the middle of a thunderstorm. It's something that seems so cool when you see spiderman and kirsten dunst is upside down making out with toby mcguire, but no one see the next day when they have the sniffles and are all congested. Wonderfull.
That was like a roller coaster! Up...REALLY UP with that freaking hot thunderstorm sex (remind me to try that sometime :p) and then down and then up and then down with the DAMN CLIFFHANGER! Ahhh! Where's chapter 6?!
Another great chapter. I was worried for a second because of the tease at the beginning. Now I can't wait to read the next part..especially after the ending.
Oh, there's a twist, but I can see it, now Nick can apply to Vegas, where they belong. I am so loving this AU, and we still have four more parts left, right?? I'm really going to hate to see this end, and that scene in the rain, awesome, and their first cold together, that's always fun. Cant' wait for more, and I can poke it you like, you're worth it.
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