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0creativity

Look Away

Jul 04, 2005 02:29

Title: Look Away
Author: 0creativity
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Nick can't take his eyes off of Greg.
Challenge: #4, voyeurism
Spoilers: "Play with Fire", "Grave Danger", general season five

( Look Away )

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subluxate July 4 2005, 08:03:29 UTC

...Holy $&^*. That was incredible. Repetition is a wonderful literary technique; by no means did you overdo it. I'd quote lines, but there are too many.

stinkymonz July 4 2005, 12:22:42 UTC

Aah, I just love that song. And I'm really liking this fic!

shacky20 July 4 2005, 12:43:45 UTC

See Matt, angst can be good, that was wonderful, yet sad and heartbreaking and true, but underneath it all was love. I hope they find they're way back too each other.

serenity151979 July 4 2005, 14:01:07 UTC

Oh, that was so well written and I love that song, it actually always reminds me of N/G when I hear it and I'm glad it inspired you to write this fic. *sob*

littlebuttercup July 4 2005, 14:36:37 UTC

*sniff* I did enough crying last night, thankyouverymuch.

No, i loved it, really. I always like it when people get inside Nick's head. I really loved the last line, because I think that's just so Nick.

So I just lay there, trying to find comfort in the fact that you can’t take your eyes off of me.

... so Nick, to try and find the positive in everything, or the almost-positive, at least.

Now you look not only lost, but like you’ve also lost all hope. I take you into my arms and I try to remind you of who you are.

I think that's where I started crying :( So sweet ...

Oh, Matt. It's amazing. There really aren't enough adjectives to describe it.