Look who tried fanfiction....
I decided to try out some fanfiction writing over at casue_ldws ..here's my first piece I've written..
Title: Silent Laughter
Author: 0nce_up0n_atime
Rating: G
Prompt: Laugher for casue_ldws
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Notes/Warning: First fanfic EVER, please be nice....constructive critisism would be helpful!
Caspian watched in horror as Susan, his Susan, was hanging on to her life over the How. Caspian knew Trumpkin could no longer hold on to her for much longer. He could see her slipping. He acted fast. He ran to the base of the how…but not fast enough. He saw the love of his life fall and crumple at the base of the How. The young man went to the girl and with much care and gentleness brought her inside the How.
No one was around; it was just Caspian and his Susan. Caspian cried. He cried for his love and hers. He cried for the love they could never share with each other. He looked down at the young woman and saw her open her eyes and look at him.
“Soldiers never cry,” she said with a painted voice and a forced laugh that broke Caspian’s heart even more, “Don’t be scared, please, remember me.”
Caspian didn’t know what to say other than, “I love you.”
Before the Queen of Old could slip out of his word forever she managed give him one last smile and the last thing Caspian ever heard from Susan was the first and last time she told him, “I love you,” and Susan was gone.
Years later when Caspian would think about his Gentle Queen he would always remember the happy times they had. Though in the midst of a war they had found time for each other. He would remember the times when they would walk side by side and the times the spent running through the forest. But he will remember her laughter the most. Not only her happy laughter but that last forced laugh as she was dying. That last laugh haunts Caspian every night, when he visits Susan…in his dreams.