Onion Rings and Cement Floors (hi i'm new)

[ketch_me]

AWAKE!!!

with eyes wide open

not knowing what to say or do

only longing for a pillow on a hard cement floor

to sleep the day away

and live in the darkness of death when night comes

DON'T JUDGE!!!!!

I can't take it anymore

pain becomes my relief

when all else fails after the fact that I have
THIS MAKES NO SENSE!!!!!

and neither do I

and neither do you

and

Comments

[sneere]

*claps* dude, nice! interesting structure, some meaningful topics, drama, a bit controversial, and you even broke it up with a bit of comedy. I love onion rings!
Peace and God bless!