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0penhearts

Fic: Chances (1/ )

May 15, 2010 02:53

title: Chances
fandom: Glee
pairing: Rachel/Will
rating: PG - PG13
spoilers: Up to Sectionals. Everything after that is my own version of canon.
a/n: Bear with me, this is the "lots of exposition" chapter. takemeaway is my fantastic beta who helped me make the timeline make infinitely more sense than it did in my first draft, so thank her for that ( Read more... )

pairing: rachel/will, fic, series: chances, tv: the rachel and will show

Comments 10

youcallitwinter May 15 2010, 10:25:52 UTC

This is very different, and I really like it! I can imagine Rachel being difficult and her divatude going out-of-control. And you've captured the whole Will/Rachel attraction, the fact that they don't behave in their conventional roles, you can't help but get the feeling that occasionally Will does try to one-up Rachel and it so figures they'd have a huge blow-up in front of the other Glee kids. And setting up the video recording of the Regionals, so Rachel. And Will mostly does try to treat her like everyone else although he feels differently ("If I'm honest with you, you never needed that practice anyway").
I'm very intrigued. Please post more soon!

0penhearts May 15 2010, 17:36:35 UTC

you can't help but get the feeling that occasionally Will does try to one-up Rachel
I think you're right about that; it's the performer in him ;) I would kill for another duet on the show where he wasn't freaking out about her giving him sex eyes, lol.

Intrigued is good! I hope it continues to hold your interest :) And thank you so much for commenting :)

fermes May 17 2010, 17:07:31 UTC

so awesome :D
i love the last line
hahaha i suck at giving fic comments

0penhearts May 18 2010, 03:24:10 UTC

Thanks for commenting anyway :) I'm glad you liked it!

umeboshicons May 17 2010, 18:32:38 UTC

Before starting reading fics I didn't know how much I was STARVING for some WR interaction, thank you for this!
I'll wait for more.

0penhearts May 18 2010, 03:25:23 UTC

Haha, now you can't unsee it! If you're looking for rec's, there's a bunch under "recommendations" in the bar below my header pic. Thanks for commenting!

smittenrosebud May 17 2010, 21:36:32 UTC

Oooh, I'm intrigued ( ... )

0penhearts May 18 2010, 03:27:00 UTC

Wow, thank you for such detailed feedback! I leave some pretty epic!comments myself, so I appreciate it :) I hope you keep enjoying it!

tattooedsiren May 18 2010, 01:22:41 UTC

OMG you can't end it there!!!

Their argument was so intense. I am intrigued by the ending and can't wait for more. :O)

0penhearts May 18 2010, 03:27:47 UTC

There's more, don't worry! I'll be posting the next part in the next few days before I have to take a little hiatus. Thank you for commenting!