Fic: Chances (8/ )

[0penhearts]

title: Chances (8

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[christyzhang]

OMGOMGOMG!!!!!! An update!!!!
You make me so happy you have no idea!!!!
Though I'm relatively new to this fic, I really fell in love with it at once. It's everything that won't ever be on the show but everything I want Will and Rachel to be. It's so beautiful!
Please keep it up and don't make wait for this long any more.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

[0penhearts]

Thanks for reading! There'll be more soon :)

[romantic_india]

OMG YAY UPDATE!!!!

He leans in and whispers, "te voy a enseñar," and feels the shiver run through her when he rolls his "R" lightly against her ear. He lingers, letting the light brush of his lips bring goose bumps up over her neck before adding, "Hmm?"

This part? SO. HOT. I literally shivered when I read it. (Btw, it literally means "I'm going to teach you", though I'm not sure about the placement of "te". Still good, though.)

Ah, this part. The tension was so palpable in every line, and I loved it. It's a slow burn, and I can't wait to read more. <333

[0penhearts]

Thanks love! I think I gave myself a shiver when I wrote that part ;)

[tattooedsiren]

OMG YAY another chapter. Brilliant as always. I love the subtlety you give these characters. I really hope more will be coming soon.

[0penhearts]

Thank you!

[wistfulwatcher]

So, I got unnaturally excited to see an update :) And what a great update it was. I loved every minute of it! I'm very happy to see that the reason for Rachel leaving is coming out--it's the perfect time, since it doesn't feel too rushed, and their relationship is at a relatively stable point. Speaking of, it's nice to get this moment of them, too, where things aren't quite so tumultuous. Of course, I love them struggling with their attraction to each other. You're quite the tease with them :)

Can't wait for another update!

[0penhearts]

Lol, thanks! I've worked really carefully with the pacing of everything, so I'm glad that's paying off for you :)

[joshdonnalyman]

To echo the previous reviewers - OMG an update. YAY!

This was seriously a great chapter. I was really glad to see that you brought the reason for Rachel leaving glee back into play. And all of it was really great; I'm interested to see how/if their relationship will blossom with Rachel going back to NY.

Looking forward to the next update!

[0penhearts]

Thank you :) I have things planned, oh so many things, for their future, lol.

[joshdonnalyman]

There has been a lack of good Will/Rachel fic lately, so I reread this one tonight... I really cannot wait for more. I hope you can post soon :)

[0penhearts]

Aw, thanks hon. It's coming along :)