fic: Follow You into the Park (2/?)

[0penhearts]

title: Follow You Into the Park (2/?)
fandom: Community
pairing: Annie/Jeff
rating: NC17
word count: 4,844
spoilers: None, but you should be familiar with all aired canon just in case. Sequel to  Never Could Be Sweeter Than With You.
a/n:  So, the first one happened.  And then another part that comes later happened.  Repeat that a few times, and I began

Comments

[annest_of_annes]

I do believe that qualifies for the "QUITE NC17" description.

[limps off to fan herself]

[0penhearts]

Haha, and this one feels like the most tame part to me! Glad you enjoyed :)

[office_bluth]

Holy hell.

This had an even worse effect on me because I had to go check the first part to remind myself what happened...and then once I remembered what happened, I couldn't stop reading this. And then I read this and now I'm dead and oh my God Mary how do you words this was just SO GOOD AND SO HOT AND excuse me while I go dunk my head in a bucket of cold water because holy hell.

[0penhearts]

UGH THAT CAP OF JEFF AND HIS STUPID AWFUL TORSO. So unappealing. I don't know how I keep coming up with material to write about someone so unattractive.

[office_bluth]

Ugh, it's seriously becoming a struggle to watch the show and have to deal with seeing his terribly unattractive face. I'm glad you could at least overlook that and write a fic in spite of the fact that he's terrible face-wise.

[crittab]

I can't even begin to describe how happy I am you're carrying on with this fic. This first part of this gave me a whole new appreciation for oral sex, and now this just brings me back to high school when grinding was all you could get away with before your parents walked in, lol.

Awesome. SO awesome. I can not wait for more of this awesomeness. If there was an award for awesome, it would go to you for this work of awesomeness.

[0penhearts]

Whee! I'm so glad you liked it.

I didn't end up working it in, but I liked the idea that the whole thing was kind of nostalgic for Jeff too; Annie would probably have had a little experience like this in highschool, but of course it's going to be different when it's JEFF and not a teenage boy, lol.

[kimmierocks]

I have no words. Excuse me whilst I go take a cold shower.

(I can not wait for the next installment.)

[0penhearts]

You are excused.

[na_thalia]

I definitely expected things to escalate beyond this but I love that it didn't... There's something so frantic and nostalgic (and intimate, too, in a way) about grinding or even just making out and all too often, Jeff and Annie get straight to the sex (which is fun in its own way!) but... This feels like them.

I cannot at all wait for part three. When you mentioned this in the Ficcy Friday (or was it episode discussion?), I did not expect it to be posted so soon! Yay ;->

[0penhearts]

I love that nostalgic comment! It was definitely on my mind as I wrote it :)

I love that keeping it from jumping to actual sex made it feel like "them" in this case for you :)