Geez, You're Something to See (5/?)

[0penhearts]

title: Geez, You're Something to See (5/?)
fandom: Community
pairing: Annie/Jeff
rating: NC-17
word count: 6,435
spoilers: None specific
a/n:  So, I've been a tid bit busy lately, but dearygirl's awesome encouragement and great beta notes have helped me get this to where it is.  As near as I can figure there are three more parts left to go (that I know about;

Comments

[kbisthebest]

Why are you so perfect?Why am I crying?I can't even.

[crittab]

I literally stopped everything I was doing to read this chapter. I freaking love this fic--it's easily my favourite one on the go right now.

And seriously... these two just need to do it already.

But WHOA the video idea was hot! The idea of Jeff sitting back with that video of Annie going down on him is kind of insanely sexy to me and I don't really know why (other than the basics of Jeff+Annie+oral=hotness).

Another amazing, amazing, amazing chapter. Please don't ever stop writing this fic.

[dearygirl]

I honestly don't think I will ever get tired of reading this. Because I totally just read it again. YOU COULD HAVE CHANGED SOMETHING. AND HOW WOULD I EVEN KNOW? TRAGIC.

But since I've already told you ad nauseum how much I love you and this, I will now only mention two moments.

FAVORITE NON-PORN MOMENT:

When he sees her stretch her arm out to the side, phone in hand, to take a picture of him as he mouths at her he bares his teeth and bites at the edge of the cup of her bra, mashing the material between his teeth and growling. Annie barely presses the camera button before she starts laughing and Jeff does too, turning to rest his forehead against her sternum.

UGH. I just love him being silly and ridiculous with her. It's unreserved Jeff and it's delightful.

FAVORITE PORN MOMENT THAT IS NOT "SHH, I'VE GOT YOU BABY":

He swipes gently at her with two fingers and then pulls them out, sucking one into his mouth before reaching forward to offer her the other. Annie reaches up and steadies his hand, turning and sucking his finger into

[maybebaby1280]

Okay, so I'll admit that I maybe kind of sort of forgot about this fic. *ducks head in shame* I mean, it's been a while since you posted the last chapter, and things have been insane in my life lately, and, and, and...... BUT THEN.... you post this chapter and the second I saw it my jaw dropped wide open and I was like YES. THIS. IN MY LIFE AGAIN. RIGHT NOW. So obviously I went back and reread the previous chapters and relived all the amazingness before moving on. And it's all just so perfect. Except now it's even better because, guh, my emotions! I am seriously in love with the direction this fic is headed.

"I'll never leave if I don't go now" is quite possibly one of the most romantic, sexiest, and saddest lines ever.

[stephanierb]

Holy Crap this was amazing. Just the perfect balance of emotional and sexual intensity, different from the previous chapters but still so wonderfully done. They're on the cusp of something, but still so hesitant to take that next step. But the trust involved in allowing someone to take photos/videos is rooted in something deeper and you expertly illustrated how it gradually made its way to the surface.

I try to leave as detailed feedback as possible for the work that I find exceptional, but this one left me at a loss for words. There are only so many ways to say perfect, so I'll just leave it at that. Perfect.