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[0silver0rose0]

I have a few updates today... :D

1. Naked was excellent, I did have to watch some bits twice because the accents were so thick, but over all some of the ideas raised it it were brilliant.

2. I've just joined a post war RPG as Katie Bell! You can check it out at fromtheashes_rp. We're still looking for people so have a look and fill in an application

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[rosietook]

*sobs*

just...

*sobs*

[0silver0rose0]

*wibbbles* Now i feel bad o.0 Maybe I went a bit overboard on the angst... IM SORRY!!! :D

[rosietook]

Oh, no...it's a good sob...kinda, just heartbreaking yk??

You certainly have a way with words :)

[mikadacrazy1]

*sobs* agnsty?? this was down right heartbreaking. just when it seemed Remus and Tonks get the ending they deserve you kill him off. granted jk might (key word MIGHT) kill him off in the last book but still.. that made me cry so hard.. and poor tonks I don't know how many women could do that and not be a wreck

[0silver0rose0]

Im sorry.. I dont like making people sad...now I'm glad i ditched the first fic I wrote based on this idea..i think I would have been killed :( Believe me I had a really hard time killing him off...imagine what JK must go through when she does it...

[potter_james]

I dont like that idea..

i think i know for sure that most of my beloved charas from HB will die in the next book. But i really dont like that idea..

And i dont think Tonks would do that.. she is Tonks.. i am sorry i think its totally Out of Character. they way she fought for Remus and their love.. i dont believe she would just leave the kid behind.

[0silver0rose0]

Thanks for the feedback... I completley get what your saying, and I agree that it is OOC, but at the same time, grief can effect people in different ways and thats kind of what I was going for...an explaination of how Tonks 'copes' with the death of the man she loves.

[coconutsoup92]

Well that was incredibly fluffy ...*sob*
It certainly is a different type of writing, and Tonks going out into the Muggle world...? I never thought of that. But for all it's *sob*ness I liked it. ha. I'm so morbid. o_O

[0silver0rose0]

Thank you :) It was difficult to decide what to do with her... When I first got the idea for the fic, I knew she was going to leave London, but then I got to a point where leaving London didn't seem like enough...So basically I wanted her cut off from things that reminded her of Remus, but at the same time I didn't want her to become a hermit? If that makes sense...

[lar_laughs]

That was great!

Since it's such an emotional piece, I bet you'll find it easier to go back and beta it when you don't have as much of an attachment to the emotions. That will probably help the flow issue which seems to come from the change from a raw emotion to a flat emotion.

All in all, it's a good idea and you wrote it out well!

-Abz

[0silver0rose0]

Thank You :) It was kind of one of those fics where your head is writing it so much faster than your hands could ever type... and your right actually it was a pretty emotional thing to write...I'll take your advice and re-look at it in a couple of weeks :D