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[forgottenskin]

Title: Pending...
Pairing: Viktor/Hermione - although it comes in at the end...
Rating: G? PG? Nothing raunchy in here. ;)
Disclaimer: Characters are of The J.K.

This is my first and so far, only, Viktor/Hermione so far. It's a bit tentative and I'm not sure where it's going. It just came out as I typed. Gentle criticism please! :)

Comments

[czarownica_asia]

"Viktor’s eyes are veiled in mystery - never let anyone in, never give anything away."

Very good, I enjoyed it alot. Above, favourite line, among many others, this one stood out further, so I picked it, I love Viktor's eyes, and any descriptions of it, I thought that was quite beautiful actually.

The comparisement between Viktor and Harry, brilliant. Always thought they did have a similarity.

Please DO continue, I really enjoyed this...

one thing that I didn't like, if I may say so, small thing...Saying that Hermione isn't beautiful, I think that is debatable, it depends on someones opinion, I guess... But I respect yours.. Please keep writing :)

[lolitas_bastard]

I guess it's not the fact that Hermione doesn't possess a beauty of her own, but going by her characterization in the book she isn't one of those girls who stand out in a crowd based on her physical appearance. She seems to me like one of those girls who gets prettier as you get to know her - if you like and enjoy her personality. I just didn't think that someone would look at her and think "Wow, she's beautiful."

But yeah, I completely understand where your coming from and thank you for sharing your opinion. I appreciate a lot :)

[lolitas_bastard]

appreciate *it* a lot, lol.

[roguetailkinker]

Nice. I especially like the hint at Viktor/Harry friendship there. Please do continue!

[forgottenskin]

Thanks :)

[sleepingarrows]

I'm intrigued, I'll be waiting for your next chap!

[forgottenskin]

If I ever get around to writing it...haha.