chapter 40

Jan 01, 2009 03:40


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angelsfall December 31 2008, 23:59:49 UTC
I think it's interesting that Daniel is showing so much trust in her, even moreso than those he's known and associated with for much longer.

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goodbye_sun January 1 2009, 02:43:02 UTC
He always suspected Max was up to no good, and Katia, well there are a few things there that may affect his judgement.

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lingeringviolet January 1 2009, 04:47:08 UTC
Oh my god! Amazing chapter! And what a fantastic New Year's present. I am so so SO excited for the next chapter.

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goodbye_sun January 1 2009, 04:55:48 UTC
Cheers! I was very worried I wasn't going to get it out in time, but Happy New Years! More action next time and then I need a restful one - I'm getting too old for so much excitement.

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goodbye_sun January 1 2009, 11:44:57 UTC
Thank you! I think you probably do my dear, I'm just up to my old tricks by not quite getting around to saying as much just yet.

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shirahimesyo January 1 2009, 09:06:15 UTC
It says a lot that Daniel was willing to kill Max on Katia's words. She seems to be coming into her powers now - the strength of a vampire, heightened senses and the ability to discern truth or lie. Very interesting collection of powers.

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goodbye_sun January 1 2009, 12:00:05 UTC
He's always thought Max was a tosser and any link to Olivia is worth his while to deal with, this was not his ideal way, but an opportunity is an opportunity. The truth/lie element is tied to her heightened senses, she could tell what Max said was more calculated than on the surface, but it was the gardenia smell and that he was just about to attack her that pretty much sold her on him being dangerous. She also shared with Daniel what Max had done in more than just words.

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gloomaphobia January 2 2009, 02:12:42 UTC
I'll admit I've been lazy about reviewing this story, but I love it! I started reading it awhile ago but never gotten round to reviewing. I loved this chapter, but the chapter before was so hilarious, and it didn't even need words. I really love this series and I'll review from here on.

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goodbye_sun January 2 2009, 14:14:11 UTC
Aww, I'm not the type to get too worried about people having to feel like they need comment all the time, just if you feel like it or have a question really. The feedback is fabulous, but I also know people can get busy sometimes, or might not be feeling too chatty that day, so no pressure.

Daniel is quite laughable at the moment, he isn't used to being the one who isn't totally in charge and lacking on info, and that has thrown him completely. And thanks so much!

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