You weave the different threads of your story so effectively and succinctly. It amazes me how you can set up or explain so much even in a short chapter. Looking forward to the next one!
Your imagery is so evocative: the smell that repels a predator, what a fantastic idea!
It's interesting that Katia made no attempt to argue with Kieran when he prevented her from running after Sophie. I can imagine her reaction if Daniel had attempted the same thing!
For some reason I sort of doubt Sophie is in any real danger, but if she is, it would be an easy way out for both Daniel and Kieran, wouldn't it?
And like the others who have mentioned it, lousy or missing instructors has just about broken the road out altogether.
Lovely, lovely shots! There's something so pure about the color and the composition. I always, always stare at each and every one of them!
OMG, Keiran's shirt is killing me! Hahaha, he looks he belongs in a 50's movie. xD He's still adorable, though.
What is Daniel up to? Leaving Katia and now Sophie, alone? I know he's not just running off, that's so unlike him. I'm worried he's going to try something stupid... but apparently Kieran must know, because he'll kill Sophie if she comes back. Hmm, hmm...
Loved Kieran's comment about Katia's blood being foul. Poor Katia.
He's just that little bit more spit and polish. No need to look like you just crawled out of a grave you know.
Nope, running and hiding. The women folk are just too much for him, one saw right through him and the other one has the ability too. Its short term, gathering his thoughts so to speak.
I think its probably the nicer way of finding out, Daniel would have been a bit too blunt.
Somehow I just dont think that Daniel is giving up so easily and to leave Kat with Kieran! I have chills just imagining what the elder may be thinking and on the same hand chills at just what Kat may be... She was obviously born an anomaly and as others have stated, had poor teachers, but her most recent is the one I blame most, if he hadnt been so stubborn (even though she made herself equally prickly) she would be more aware. Although therein where would the story be, LOL!
Not so much giving up as needing to get away for a bit, she was just a bit more than he was prepared to deal with, particularly when it want from her just being kept out of the fray, to actually being the person he is relying on. That switch just changed directions a bit more than he was ready to take.
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Sophie has seen quite a bit in the past few weeks, she is bound to have done some growing up. Maybe.
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It's interesting that Katia made no attempt to argue with Kieran when he prevented her from running after Sophie. I can imagine her reaction if Daniel had attempted the same thing!
For some reason I sort of doubt Sophie is in any real danger, but if she is, it would be an easy way out for both Daniel and Kieran, wouldn't it?
And like the others who have mentioned it, lousy or missing instructors has just about broken the road out altogether.
Lovely, lovely shots! There's something so pure about the color and the composition. I always, always stare at each and every one of them!
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With Kieran it comes dripping with syrup and kindness, I think it makes it much easier for swallowing that bitter pill.
She is young and headstrong, but isn't one to throw herself into danger, she should manage ok.
Things didn't go to plan, so its taken a bit to try and reshuffle. Daniel really, really wanted Katia to just be a bystander.
Honestly the pics are pretty much as is with my game, I only resize and adjust the contrast a bit.
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What is Daniel up to? Leaving Katia and now Sophie, alone? I know he's not just running off, that's so unlike him. I'm worried he's going to try something stupid... but apparently Kieran must know, because he'll kill Sophie if she comes back. Hmm, hmm...
Loved Kieran's comment about Katia's blood being foul. Poor Katia.
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Nope, running and hiding. The women folk are just too much for him, one saw right through him and the other one has the ability too. Its short term, gathering his thoughts so to speak.
I think its probably the nicer way of finding out, Daniel would have been a bit too blunt.
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