Chapter 56

[100daysofsorrow]

Comments

[sixtylilies]

Oh, fuck.

I should have more to say than that, but you've reduced me to incoherent cussing.

[goodbye_sun]

I guess I've been starting at the chapter notes for this too long, I didn't expect it to be such a surprise :O

[pixiealchemist]

I agree with azaya. Holy fuck.

[goodbye_sun]

Hopefully it was the good kind of holy fuckeryness.

[goodbye_sun]

Cheers, its always good to know not slogging through a bunch of text is the right decision.

It will all be fine. Kind of. I think.

[goodbye_sun]

Ta muchly!

You don't know how many times I moved everything around until I decided on this sequence.

It wasn't the plan, but she saw something in his eyes that just made her decide walking away was the right thing to do. Don't count him out just yet, he has attitude to spare :P

You are very right, its sort of his way of trying to forget about things.

[phoenixfg]

I like the flow. And so many surprising little things and BIG things going on without the unnecessary text!

Kieran sure wasn't expecting that! Nor the barmaid! o.O

[goodbye_sun]

Cheers! After fighting with it, I finally realised I was better off not trying to explain it when the pictures could do the work.

He was asking for it though ;) - but the barmaid definitely didn't see that coming.