[Alice in Wonderland] Never Drink the Coffee in Wonderland

[100paperfans]

Title: Never Drink the Coffee in Wonderland
Universe: Alice in Wonderland
Word Count: 1249
Prompt: Coffee and pencils used in unexpected ways.
Notes: Speed ficcing with mysocalledhell, belluminabyssus , and liralen . A possible next generation of Alice’s adventures. Not to be taken seriously. At all.

Comments

[mysocalledhell]

*snickers* Oh my ... Poor Maddie .. Maddie the Mad Hater's Daughter? Hhhhmmmmm?

[100paperfans]

LOL, quite possibly!

[belluminabyssus]

Ooh, loved this. I am ashamed to say that while I've seen the film Alice & Wonderland (both of 'em, actually), I've never read the book and this makes me very much want to get on that! I really liked Maddie's character, and I particularly loved the ending. How very mysterious. :)

[100paperfans]

Yes, read it! I still have my book from when I was younger and reread it endlessly, haha. I have a soft spot for things that don't make sense apparently, lol.

I'm glad the ending worked for you and you thought it was mysterious~ I was iffy on using present tense all of sudden, but it seemed to work better than using 'said' at the very end.

[liralen]

Ooooo... so you went with fanfiction too! Wow.

I love the idea of Alice having had offspring, and how people would see her after the adventure. I really liked the "dream" and the resulting reality. *laughs*

You kind of got the hint of a rabbit in there with the twist as well, the what we think is going to happen goes the other way. As with Alice's adventure we're kind of expecting Maddie to have her own... and when she does, she ends up on the opposite track. I *love* how you did that.

[100paperfans]

So glad to hear you liked this. Thank you!