Comments | 10k_prompts: SS/HG, HS/HG, NC-17

cosmic_llin in 10k_prompts

SS/HG, HS/HG, NC-17

Jul 26, 2006 22:29

This is a great idea for a comm; browsing 10k_drabbles is giving me so many ideas... many of them somewhat disturbing...
Like this one...

Title: Changes
Length: 100 words
Inspiration: Looking through the pairings, I was suddenly struck by the idea of this one...

( I worry myself sometimes... )

Comments 9

celestat July 26 2006, 21:48:22 UTC

OMG! It took a few moments for me to realise who HS was *hangs head in shame* but when it clicked... Oh dear! *g*

Really great idea!

cosmic_llin July 26 2006, 21:54:49 UTC

Hehe, I'm glad, I think it reads better if it doesn't click right away...
Thanks for reading!

celestat July 26 2006, 21:58:27 UTC

I like stories that demand something of their readers. This was great! When it clicked I was torn between "eeewww" and convulsive laughter.

Hehe, I hope my fetishes won't ever push me as far as Hermione's :-)

veradee July 26 2006, 22:53:34 UTC

That's slightly disturbing, indeed, but you did a very good job at 'misleading' your reader. I had to read it twice until I realised who her lover was.

cosmic_llin July 26 2006, 22:59:41 UTC

Heehee, thank you!

20ravenclaw07 July 31 2006, 13:11:10 UTC

I'm slow... Glad I wasn't the only one who had to re-read a few times to figure out who HS is.

cosmic_llin August 1 2006, 06:55:51 UTC

LOL, thanks for reading!

nicthenefarious August 1 2006, 06:02:05 UTC

I didn't connect the HS thing until I actually started reading it... and then I got it immediately.

OMG. *brain melt*

Yeah, that's about it.

I probably wouldn't have touched this with a ten foot pole if I had realized what it was before I clicked and started reading.

...But it was surprising good, in a vaguely creepy and really weird way. Congrats! You pulled off the impossible!

cosmic_llin August 1 2006, 06:56:50 UTC

LOL, thank you very much...
And believe me, I wouldn't ever go for this normally, but my muse takes me strange places...