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cindyls1969 March 27 2013, 13:40:58 UTC
A lovely story. I enjoyed your use of POV and the imagery of Noah at the lake thinking. Stubborn cuss, lol.

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123cariad March 28 2013, 21:41:56 UTC
Thank you Cindy for taking the time to read and comment much appreciated x

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nukefan1959 March 27 2013, 15:17:08 UTC
Perfection,

what a fantastic read really enjoyed the reflective look back by each of them the insecurities comming to the forfront over each other.

Loved it thank you.

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123cariad March 28 2013, 21:43:26 UTC
Oh you have made me so happy thank you for your wonderful comment xx

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wheelie47 March 27 2013, 17:07:07 UTC
Just loved this touching and excellent story, Stella!

Love how you tell it from both POVs. It really brings the artwork to life. And I love your descriptive style of writing.

Thank goodness for Casey and his concussion for finally bringing them together.

Such a tender lovemaking scene. Perfect for their first time together especially with Luke not pushing Noah for what he wasn't ready for. Beautifully done.

Loved 'A Time for us'.

And gorgeous artwork too!

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123cariad March 28 2013, 21:48:02 UTC
I am so happy you enjoyed the story Anne ...I love POV'S So glad they worked ... Thank you once again for your beta'ing skills you are awesome x

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sarahsezlove March 27 2013, 21:19:56 UTC
This was wonderful from start to finish.
You captured Noah's confusion perfectly and I always love a confident Luke.

The love-making was beautifully done...

'The sound that left Noah’s mouth was sinful. It was a sound that would stay with Luke forever. It came from deep inside Noah’s chest… deep from within his very soul.'

Loved it, Stella :)

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123cariad March 28 2013, 21:50:02 UTC
I agree a sassy confident Luke always works for me ..thank you for your wonderful comments Sarah thank you for reading so happy you enjoyed x

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valenti1965 March 27 2013, 22:17:11 UTC
Breath. Breath. Breath. Ok ..phew...I feel knackered after reading that amazing love making scene Stella...Good god I need a cold shower also!!

Ah I am so glad Noah helped Casey which in turn lead him and Luke to be together as they always should be.

I have totally adored A Time For Us. Stunning artwork and words.

Well done. And please..no more doubts...ever!! You rock woman! xxx

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123cariad March 28 2013, 21:51:23 UTC
I thank you for everything your comments your support your friendship no words can convey what they all mean <3

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