Another excellent chapter, Stella! I love how you are giving us their different points of view; it really brings the story to life and the detailed flashbacks help paint the picture of Luke's confused emotions with regard to Noah.
No wonder Luke is confused by Noah; he's giving off so many mixed signals.
Love Luke's thoughts on meeting Noah. Of course he was instantly attracted to him! And it seems fate keeps bringing them back in contact with each other. Loved the description of the kisses... so vivid!
And that was so in character for Luke to confront Noah!
It does make you want and hug Luke so tight bless him .. Noah really needs to sort hos head out lol Thank you for all your support and yet another fabulous comment xxx
Another wonderful chapter! You've captured perfectly here how Luke and Noah are continually drawn to each other. They just need each other and their road to come together is rarely easy, but always worth the effort.
And Noah is a complete mess here, caught between his fears and wants and giving Luke confusing signals. One again, you write their emotions so vividly that it is impossible not to have empathy for both of them even when we are seeing the events through one POV.
Beautiful, Stella! I have no idea why you were worried! This is every bit as good as all the other great stories! Now, I'm looking forward to them getting together!
Poor Luke, it's tearing him apart to see his best friend with the man he's so in love with. You skillfully convey his torment and Noah's sad longing. Brilliant chapter.
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No wonder Luke is confused by Noah; he's giving off so many mixed signals.
Love Luke's thoughts on meeting Noah. Of course he was instantly attracted to him! And it seems fate keeps bringing them back in contact with each other. Loved the description of the kisses... so vivid!
And that was so in character for Luke to confront Noah!
Touching scene with Lily.
What next for our boys?
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hank you for another great comment Anne xxx
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Another fab chapter :)
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I like how Maddie challenged him ...so best woman won lol very funny.
Another wonderful chapter with such descriptive writing and amazing dialogue between the two guys. Loved Lily and Luke's scene also. xxx
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And Noah is a complete mess here, caught between his fears and wants and giving Luke confusing signals. One again, you write their emotions so vividly that it is impossible not to have empathy for both of them even when we are seeing the events through one POV.
Beautiful, Stella! I have no idea why you were worried! This is every bit as good as all the other great stories! Now, I'm looking forward to them getting together!
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