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seajellybaby March 30 2013, 14:39:34 UTC
Stella! Every time I read something new of yours, you just get better and better! I love that you have Noah out in a rowboat! This is totally in character because Noah always retreats into himself when he's scared, angry or confused. He has so many conflicting emotions poor guy!

Love your Luke in this... He seems so sure of himself and of Noah's feelings so he's not afraid to persue that avenue...

Of course it's all very sad for Maddie!

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123cariad March 30 2013, 20:41:49 UTC
Thank you So much Gillian for you wonderful comment ... I am so pleased that you think my writing is improving xx

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random_nic March 30 2013, 20:51:48 UTC
Finally getting a chance to read this! I got waylaid by the NCAAs, unexpected babysitting, and sleep deprivation - but today I'll have enough blocks of time available to catch up.

Great start so far!

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123cariad March 31 2013, 01:35:06 UTC
I hope you enjoy x

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