Ellie's Journal - The Nuke/Jansis Prompt Meme Commmunity

May 17, 2013 09:54

Title: Ellie’s Journal

Author: 123cariad

Beta: All mistakes are mine

Characters: Luke and Noah

Rating: PG

Warnings: Fluff , Fluff and more fluff

Word Count: 1,906

Disclaimer: ATWT characters are owned by Telenext; no copyright infringement intended.

Prompter: moongirl24 with the prompt .... ‘ Tomorrow ’: Part of the Nuke/Jansis Prompt Meme ( Read more... )

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valenti1965 May 17 2013, 09:33:38 UTC
Oh Stela! That was truly wonderful!!! I bet they don't want to lose their only daughter but know she has to make her own life and now its time for them as a couple again. Glad Luke is going to share his diary with Noah so he can read it.

Love that end quote oh so true indeed.

You are one amazing writer indeed. Loved this. xxx

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123cariad May 17 2013, 17:27:57 UTC
Aww thanks Louise so happy you enjoyed it .. it is so hard to let go to our children ...
thank you for you lovely comment and your wonderful support and encouragement xxx

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wheelie47 May 17 2013, 10:28:19 UTC
Ah Stella! What a beautiful story!

I love introspective Luke. And loved reading all his thoughts on Noah, their life together and the joy their beautiful daughter has given them.

What a wonderful idea to write Ellie's journal of all her yesterdays just Noah.

I could really feel Noah's calming influence and strength through your words. Luke and Noah balance each other perfectly.

And that last line... perfect!

Thank you for sharing x

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123cariad May 17 2013, 17:28:56 UTC
Thank you so much Anne I truly appreciate the time you taken to read and comment it means so much xxx

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123cariad May 17 2013, 21:38:28 UTC
Awww thank you so much Bijou so appreciate that you took the time to read and that you enjoyed it ...

LOL You have to love Lucinda x

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nukefan1959 May 17 2013, 22:39:37 UTC
Stella,
Absolutely loved reading this, the way you had Luke retracing their lives and the thought proces behind it was amazing would love to say please can we have more .
Thank you made cry made me smile everything a great read needs.

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123cariad May 18 2013, 11:32:18 UTC
Thank you so much... I love stories that look back over their lives ... I so happy you thought it worked and made sense lol <3

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cindyls1969 May 18 2013, 04:39:48 UTC
A lovely story. I love the thought of Luke fretting over his and Noah's daughter's wedding. He is such a worrier.

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123cariad May 18 2013, 11:32:43 UTC
Thank you Cindy so happy you enjoyed it x

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