Loves eternal dream .- Nuke Prompt MEME

Oct 09, 2013 21:12

Title: Loves eternal dream .
Author: 123cariad
Characters: Luke Snyder & Noah Mayer
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,922 approx : One Shot
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are owned by Telenext; no copyright infringement intended.
Beta: valenti1965 .. Thank you so much Louise for you time & patience your help and advice has been invaluable xxxxx
Artist: Me hope you like
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random_nic October 10 2013, 03:46:06 UTC
STELLA! So heartwrenching to experience Luke's loss, but heartwarming to see them reunited so many decades later. Beautiful!

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123cariad October 10 2013, 17:31:11 UTC
Thank you Nic for taking the time to read and comment so glad you enjoyed x

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jb1183 October 10 2013, 05:49:14 UTC
Tears, Stella! And not just little tears but serious weeping. You write these emotional pieces FLAWLESSLY!

I love that you used Luke's first person narration. It gave such intimacy and immediacy to the feelings of unspeakable loss and then incredible joy. And I loved that once Luke was reunited with Noah, it was as if he couldn't even remember that they were apart for sixty years.

Powerfully moving! So wonderful, Stella!

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123cariad October 10 2013, 17:30:30 UTC
Thank you Jim I have been so worried that the story was to sad lol thanks for you wonderful comment xx

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newhaven183 October 10 2013, 19:11:30 UTC
Well done, friend. Simply that. Well done indeed.

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123cariad October 10 2013, 20:23:19 UTC
Thank you :) so glad you enjoyed it x

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sarahsezlove October 12 2013, 10:04:53 UTC
Heart wrenching and heartwarming.
Damn, but this was wonderful, Stella.

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123cariad October 12 2013, 14:30:55 UTC
Thank you for reading Sarah xx and for you lovely comment x

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seajellybaby October 31 2013, 08:14:21 UTC
Talk about having the reader sobbing from the very first line! Geez! This is absolutely stunning! Such a deep and focused insight into Luke's mind and how he is feeling at the loss of Noah!

Heartbreaking but I loved it!

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123cariad November 1 2013, 08:09:02 UTC
Thank you for such a lovely comment Gillian .. so happy you loved this xxx

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