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Oct 21, 2012 16:19

Title: Not the Night I planned
Author: 123cariad
Pairing: Luke & Noah
Rating: PG
Word Count: Approx 2,392 One Shot
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are owned by Telenext; no copyright infringement intended.
Warnings: None ..
Summary: Noah Mayer is one organised individual , he loves structure he loves to plan! His Friday night classic movie marathon ( Read more... )

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scj0710 October 22 2012, 02:26:14 UTC
Very clever and totally adorable. Very happy that the night was not what Noah had planned!! By the way - The picture is perfect and fits Not The Night I Planned very well.

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123cariad October 22 2012, 15:00:36 UTC
Thank you .. so happy you enjoyed , and yeap the picture is perfect xx well Noah/Jake are perfect lol

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wheelie47 October 22 2012, 13:28:59 UTC
Loved this Stella!! What a unique way of telling a story!

We got to find out so much about Noah and Luke just through hearing Noah's side of the conversation.

The sweet and sour pork balls had me lol!

So glad Gabe convinced Noah to go with him and thank god his night didn't go as planned.

Loved the pic too!!

Maybe we could have a sequel about their first date?? x

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123cariad October 22 2012, 15:01:57 UTC
Thank you Anne, I really appreciate all the support you have given for all my stories , I so happy you enjoy this look into Noah life xx

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random_nic October 22 2012, 14:34:41 UTC
I'm having a tough time getting past the part where Noah eats balls. Just the images...

But anyway. I totally relate to Noah here. Not that I've ever rambled on about myself to a total stranger.

Um. Actually, exactly like that!

In his case, it comes across he's nervous and excited talking to Luke. He definitely wants to make a connection with him, but normally doesn't talk so much to people he doesn't know - so he's kind of goofily awkward about it. Which on him comes across adorable. Of course Luke's gonna want that date!

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123cariad October 22 2012, 15:04:35 UTC
Nic thank you for seeing how I wanted Noah to come across , I just love that you have sussed him out lol and hey balls are great ha ah

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jeri_1116 October 23 2012, 04:56:07 UTC
I'm not surprised that the gay guy enjoys pork balls. I'm not. ;)

Luke is an incredible listener. And I love quirky Noah, he's cute and lovable. His ramblings were perfect.

This was not a crackfic. Nicely done, bb. Nicely done. :)

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123cariad October 24 2012, 12:04:25 UTC
LOL .. what can I say that man loves him some pork balls lol thank you for lovley review it is so appreciated xxx

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123cariad October 24 2012, 12:05:39 UTC
It is a bit out there lol no idea how it arrived at this thank you for reading and reviewing I really appreciate it xx

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