FIC: "Breathless" [Kuroshitsuji, PG-13]

[12gatsunohime]

So because I really need to start writing again, I decided to take the idea I've had running around my head the longest and put it into words.

Title: Breathless
Series: Kuroshitsuji
Rating PG-13
Pairing: Sebastian/Ciel
Disclaimer: I own none of the characters or ideas contained herein. I am not making any money from this.
Summary: He tells him not to

Comments

[sayuri2023]

This is absolutely perfect. The kiss makes sense, coz in the anime Sebastian's lips were the last thing that it focussed :)
Loved the story!!!

[angel0399]

This is so awesome!! I love the poetry behind your words, you paint a very vivid picture ^_^

[sinamour]

Good one. It is nice reading about how Ciel loses sensation in his body as he loses his memory - the correlation between the two factors is nice - and yet still loves it all. It is heartbreakingly sad that Ciel dies, but I'm damn glad that he died in the nicest way - via Sebastian's mercy (or the lack of it, whichever way you see it).

Thanks for sharing this. You have a very nice way of prose. It may not mean much, but yeah...Thanks again!

[neocloud9]

Awesome. Fucking awesome.

[bj_kun7]

Beautiful~ This was a joy to read. Thanks for sharing <3