Fic: "Breathless: Part II" (Kuroshitsuji, SebaCiel, PG-13)

Sep 24, 2010 01:02

So how about those drabbles I took requests for, huh?

First come, first served, so:

Title: Breathless, Part II
Series: Kuroshitsuji
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: SebaCiel
Warnings; Death, other implied violence, mentions of the sex. Also, your guess is as good as mine what kind of canon this takes place in, since it's supposed to follow Breathless.
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bj_kun7 September 24 2010, 06:25:36 UTC
Oh my~ *fans self* Those last few sentences really got to me. Very creepy, but very awesome! I loved it <3

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kiwiitin September 24 2010, 06:29:07 UTC
Oh man! *__* How'd I miss the first part!? For shame on me! Such a tasty fic~ (pun intended xD)
I really liked the feel of it, and the fact that it's really easy to imagine it as the alternative ending (without Kuro2).
And then you temp me with making a request! :I Ask and you shall recieve! *trying hard to pick something* So many choises--!

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neocloud9 September 24 2010, 12:43:20 UTC
Cool, cool, cool!

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12gatsunohime September 24 2010, 12:55:37 UTC
YOURS IS NEXT. :D

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neocloud9 September 24 2010, 15:07:46 UTC
EEEE~

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akiru_chan September 24 2010, 22:19:18 UTC
I love the darkness to this. Just the over all creepy and morbidity of it. Just the thought of Sebastian eating Ciel's body has be both repulsed and excited. It really makes me question my sanity. lol. xD

Lovely read! ♥

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12gatsunohime September 24 2010, 22:29:00 UTC
To be honest, I kind of can't believe I wrote it. XD But after I finished the first part I pretty much came to the conclusion that's what he'd do because...well, he's a demon.

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akiru_chan September 24 2010, 22:35:18 UTC
You know, I think that might be why I like it so much. Because Sebastian is a demon and no matter how unsightly we think it is that he would eat Ciel's body, it is something a demon would do. Because demons are unsightly, no matter how charismatic Sebastian might be.

I don't know, I just think I'm a fan at seeing Sebastian being demonic apposed to his false charms. haha. xD

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12gatsunohime September 24 2010, 22:38:38 UTC
You know what, I do, too. (That's why I liked the latest chapter of the manga so much :D)

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goodbyemyheart September 25 2010, 21:58:37 UTC
I read this last night at my tournament on my friend's phone. Bolen asked me why I looked like I was about to cry. I couldn't really explain it to him.

This is phenomenal. I'm still speechless. :'D

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12gatsunohime September 25 2010, 22:10:07 UTC
Oh, thank you~ I consider speechlessness an honor. And thank you for writing the prompt for it!

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goodbyemyheart September 25 2010, 22:10:40 UTC
No problem <3

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