Fic: "In Nomine" [Chapter One] (Kuroshitsuji, R)

[12gatsunohime]

Happy Birthday, Ciel! We love you so~

...So this is gonna be a long, dark, twisted thing. Not to say I didn't enjoy every minute of it, of course. Full credit goes to goodbyemyheart  for the name theme, but everything else in this monstrosity is mine.

Title: In Nomine
Series: Kuroshitsuji (Anime Canon) 
Rating: R for violent imagery (no seriously)
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[goodbyemyheart]

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

I JUST

I JUST

OH MY GOD.
OH MY GOD.

I am so so so so excited for this, dear. NFFF.

I really like your OCs, to be honest. xD; I'm hoping Lucy develops more, and I'm not totally convinced of Michael's motives, but the start is wonderful. And OH, chills up my spine with Ciel. You make him so languid and bored~ He moved the most easily of the characters through this chapter, which I appreciated. :3

OKAY. NOW GIVE US MOAR, AND SOON. -flails-

[12gatsunohime]

EEEEEEEE~ Your excitement fuels my own. :D

Oh, THANK YOU. XD I gotta tell you, Michael and Lucy are the hardest part of this, Lucy especially. (And yeah, Michael's motives are meant to be questioned. >_>) Ciel is so damn FUN, though, I'm so glad you liked him.

THE SECOND CHAPTER IS UP IN ANOTHER TAB, NO LIE. (ASLDKJSFFDSJ DON'T YOU DIE ON ME, STORY. ಠ_ಠ)

But yes. THANK YOU~♥♥♥

[goodbyemyheart]

OCs are really hard to get used to in fics...God, Emily gave me SUCH hell. xD Eventually you get to know them, though, so I have hope for them. ^-^ (And then you can recycle them into all sorts of other things~ Jezebeth is my new favourite recyclable character. xD)
I'm definitely questioning them~

I got SUCH Bartimaeus vibes from their first conversation. xD; IT WAS GREAT. And I am so tempted to record that dialogue, MMF. (May I? xD;)

NEEEE~

No problem~!

[12gatsunohime]

Believe it or not, now that I've actually put some of it up, my ideas have just exploded, you have no idea (that, and a bit of talking to nothing I did the other day that made me creep myself out ^^;;). But yeah, I think I've got a handle on it...sort of. XD My characters have a tendency to go places I don't want them to, but it all works out. (The only reason I won't say anything is it would ruin the whole story, but yeah. Question away. :D)

Oh, I know. XD The snark just keeps staying there, though it's a different flavor than Bartimaeus's. (UH TO SAY I WOULD BE HONORED WOULD BE AN UNDERSTATEMENT, GO RIGHT AHEAD.)

My fingers are starting to hurt from typing, but it lets me know I'm doing it right. XD

[dilovesyunjae]

OMG! OMG! weeeee~~

[ceirwy]

OHHHH YAY! Oh this is so.. just... EXCITING!

[amanuensis1]

Oooh, I think you have me! Wanna see how this unfolds. :D