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12thgrave

Inferno; Chapter Two- Safe

Aug 09, 2011 14:42

Title: Inferno; Chapter Two- Safe
Genre: Action, Angst, Romance, AU
Main Pairing: Ruki x ??
Rating: PG-13
Warning: None
Disclaimer: Truth be told, I own them now. I adopted them against their will and they are now my older-than-me sons.
Summary: Stuck in a burning building, Takanori relies on his ladder to save him as he has them and many ( Read more... )

inferno, ruki x ?, the gazette

Comments 4

zaiif_mika August 9 2011, 22:31:28 UTC

I don't ever really comment on anything, but I have to say, this is AWESOME so far. I'm anxious for Ruki the whole time I'm reading, like, "Is he gonna be okay!?" *keels over*

Anyway, it's great! I can't wait to read the next part! :)

12thgrave August 9 2011, 22:33:29 UTC

Thanks for commenting! Haha I get sad when no one comments and I don't think people read it so I used to stop writing all together haha but thanks for reading!!

zaiif_mika August 9 2011, 23:01:36 UTC

Ahh, I know how that feels. I do the same, except the only excuse I have at the moment is writer's block. O.o
And no problem. :)

in_bloom81 September 2 2011, 10:45:48 UTC

I love the concept of the fic~ What I find interesting : I like how a certain small amount of time (of ruki being stuck in a burning building) has been divided into chapters and how the narration which revolves around his thoughts and feelings extends the fic .. that is , for now I get the idea that the chapters consists of a few hours of the day instead of a number of days.. So it’s not the actual mechanical-time that passes by which comprises of this fic’s length but it’s the psychological-time consisting of emotions and flashbacks that gets extended. The title also appealed to me. The space Ruki’s in ..his mental state.. really is in hell ( ... )