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Inferno; Chapter Four- Big Day

Aug 22, 2011 22:06

Title: Inferno; Chapter Four- Big Day
Genre: Action, Angst, Romance, AU
Main Pairing: Ruki x ??
Rating: PG-13
Warning: None
Disclaimer: Truth be told, I own them now. I adopted them against their will and they are now my older-than-me sons.
Summary: Stuck in a burning building, Takanori relies on his ladder to save him as he has them and many ( Read more... )

inferno, ruki x ?, the gazette

Comments 3

missmynn August 24 2011, 22:04:18 UTC

I've just read all the chapters in one go and was pleasantly surprised! I really love the interaction between the characters, by the way. Can't wait to read more of Takanori's witty, childish banter and more of Akira's history (why yes, I am a reituki fan xD) nd I giggled at Uruha playing nurse to Aoi in the last chapter, I can SO imagine that happening (Aoi would probably cherish the moment, lol) It's also interesting to read a fic in this kind of setting; it's the first time I've read a firemen-fic, and I've read a lot of fanfics over the years, hahah! Hoping to read more soon! ^^

12thgrave August 25 2011, 03:13:57 UTC

Lol thank you for reading!! And I'm glad you're so inteteated in this, i love writing this kind of fiction. I started this back in 2009 but stopped so I decided to try it again and boom!! Big Muse for this story haha I'm going to try my best to post every Monday so watch out!

in_bloom81 October 4 2011, 09:51:07 UTC

I LOVE Uruha's personality ! the 'right'-kinda person to help Taka and be pals with (^_^)b
'“Ruki, your newness is showing,” Takeru giggled causing confusion to parade across Takanori’s face.' lol
'I’m not picking up his slack when the time comes,' instantly reminded me of Ruki's present condition of being needed to be rescued. I'm sure it's not Ruki's fault and I think he IS or at least has what it takes to be a good firefighter .. it's just that I feel sorry for him cause right now , stuck in the buliding' , he might be convinced that Akira thinks his evaluation of Taka as 'only good grades without skills' was true after all and that he was right to have looked down upon Taka in the first place. I noticed how Taka seemed nervous when Akira addressed him in the last chapter..