Inferno; Chapter Three: Big Day

[12thgrave]

Title: Inferno; Chapter Three: Big Day.
Genre: Action, Angst, Romance, AU
Main Pairing: Lets read...
Rating: PG-13-R
Warning: Fire (for those who have a fear of it) and none other than that
Disclaimer: Mommy said pets don't include sexy men with kitty-ears on...
Summary: Trapped in a building on fire, Takanori has to wait for his own teammates

Comments

[kawasakininja]

Happy new year! Oh, crap your new layout isn't showing upper case letters xD So forgive me an occasional mistake (looks nice btw).

New chapter was great, more background to ruki's story and introducing of new characters. Uruha was great, from the easy way he started bonding with Ruki to his protectiveness of sorts, looking after him and showing him the ropes. It was kind of like I imagine ruki and uruha's relationship could be for real. Reita's introduction on the other had, was totally opposite from Uruha's, all hard ass and filled with 'rage', but it was great in that way.

“Oh, pish-posh Akira. It’s fun having a new kid aboard! Plus, he’s the youngest we’ve ever had, like a firefighting genius…”

“Or a pain in the ass,” Akira hissed, completely avoiding looking at Takanori as he crossed his muscular arms across his chest.Hi, hi, loved the 'firefighting genius' and the coldness and animosity coming from Reita. But again his and Uruha's closeness is very enjoyable to see transferred in this AU story too

[12thgrave]

lol YAY! i got a like, book-comment *loves you now*
and thanks for commenting && reading and yeah... It's okay if uppercase mistakes are made... and thanks! I was being lazy one day and was all , "hey~ new GazettE scans" =) and so, Uruha is like Ruki's big brother in away playful but still protective.
and for some reason, when I first wrote this... I forgot all about Aoi, so I was like "SHIT!" and kinda made him there, but not there... if you know what I mean XD *fails* and I had to force myself to watch ladder 49 for the first movie of 2010 (and I cried from it XD) and I had to get the emotions from that movie onto here with Ruki~ and thank you for reading and commenting, really makes me happy (and makes me want to skip my English paper to work more on chapter 4)

[kawasakininja]

Hi, hi, but it was okay with Aoi not being really in there. Others needed the spotlight since they were being introduced, but the way you did squeeze him, I can't actually believe it was an afterthought, because it was so funny. And having him and the twins in the background worked well for showing the daily life at the station, don't need to have full exposure on every character in every chapter.

Well, fics are important, but English paper is bit more so no rush with the next chapter, but I am glad the comment made you happy :)

[12thgrave]

yeah, I was half asleep this morning before I realized I was missing the 7th firefighter XD and shhh~ you're not supposed to say that~ I don't want to do research lol

[yhue]

Ninja linked her flist to this story some hour or two ago and yesssss. I'm seriously loving this so far. Firefighters! Interesting theme, I don't think I've ever read one like this before.

Your characterisation is great, I love the moods you have here, both heavy and light, the humour even though Ruki knows he's in deep shit.

I'm wondering who the 'traitor' is, I hope there's more of him in the story. Your way of building the plot is nice, with flaskbacks and little bits of information in places, and not to mention your banners are lovely.

There's something about one of the previous chapters describing Aoi with his hair tied in a pony tail and later getting nursed by Uruha that was very endearing to me. Great job.

Keep updating! C:

[12thgrave]

really!? *dances in joy* wow, that made my mood go from yay to OMFG YAYYY!!!! *throws fire crackers*

I'm so glad you like it! (and I am flattered by the banner comment) and trust me, for Ruki to get to know reita, the 'traitor' will be brought up more... thank you so much~! It makes me so happy when I know people read and like it (even though it's different... but there are a lot of drug dealers, vampires, and just many themes repeated XD I try~)

[yhue]

YES. Ninja is considerate and makes fic rec posts for the lazier people (like me) who don't want to sift through the 139081902 fics in jry to try to find one goddamn good fic.

I hardly give multichaps a chance since I absolutely hate waiting for updates but this topic's so interesting i couldn't help it. Update, updateeee!

I would laugh and point at Reita if he ever had an affair with traitor person but we'll see. 8D

[12thgrave]

how nice of her! and don't worry, I plan on dedicating tomorrow to my English research paper chapter 4 because I mentally shifted things around and need to write down ideas in a note book XD

[kyoselflove]

I just stumbled upon this and I am very intrigued <3

Never read anything like this before, very unique. Can't wait to see how it turns out ^.^

[12thgrave]

thanks for reading and commenting ^__^

[12thgrave]

I know this is VERY late, but I'm starting this story again and I have written way more chapters than I have previously posted. I would love it if you wanted to start reading it again, there are a few small, but major, changes to the story. Hope you enjoy it again!!

[albinococonut23]

Yayyy!!!! an update! 8D

Ehehee! Sorry this comment is coming a little late, hahaha.
Arrrrgghhh I really like this story.. REAAALLY. People have already said this, but Aoi's little parts were so funny, and i laughed out loud at Miku's game getting 'eaten' as well. xP

Your characters are all really interesting, and of course Reita's got my attention. heh heh hehh

Looking forward to more!! And more about the traitor too, of course! =)

[12thgrave]

lol, better late than never ne?
and yesh, my VCR ate my original video of Disney's the Jungle Book
and more will be up by friday! thats a promise

[micukofelton]

it's such an amazing fic, it's only thanks to kawasakininja that I'm able to read it, I'm so thankful she poined it out to me. ^^ it's really exciting. I love it and I'd love to read more. <3

[12thgrave]

Yay! I must thank her!
and thank you for reading, very glad you liked it.

[12thgrave]

I know this is VERY late, but I'm starting this story again and I have written way more chapters than I have previously posted. I would love it if you wanted to start reading it again, there are a few small, but major, changes to the story. Hope you enjoy it again!!