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12thgrave

Inferno; Chapter Four: Bar Night

Jan 15, 2010 20:08

Title: Inferno; Chapter Four: Bar Night.
Genre: Action, Angst, Romance, AU
Main Pairing: Rukix? AoixUruha
Rating: PG-13-R
Warning: Mentions of alcohol
Disclaimer: Mommy said pets don't include sexy men with kitty-ears on...
Summary: Trapped in a building on fire, Takanori has to wait for his own teammates to come a rescue him. But as he waits, ( Read more... )

alicenine, sug, an cafe, inferno, the gazette

Comments 13

yhue January 16 2010, 02:34:13 UTC

OH, OH, OH I WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT THIS FIC TODAY

Will read when I wake up from my heat stroke. Fucking summer.

12thgrave January 16 2010, 02:41:32 UTC

lol, me too~ I almost for got to post, but then I was attacked with text messages from my beta....
And umm... get well so? I wish you good health..?
What do you say for a situation like that?
Ano, want my cold air and I can take your heat? I love warmth~ *hint: fire fighter story*

yhue January 16 2010, 03:00:27 UTC

You almost forgot 8(

Idk what you say actually. Just give me like, some ice cubes or something.

YAY SNOW

yhue January 16 2010, 02:59:39 UTC

DDHFDHFDUIUDSUJHASJHAJJH I KNEW IT WAS SAGA >O<

And um. I dunno. Not much progress in this chapter is there? Except for knowing the traitor is Saga. o3o still, WHEEEEE UPDATE.

I love how they're all big and courageous firefighters... sitting on each others' laps. lDDD

The celebration scene was adorable, especially the beer pong. xD Uruha and Aoi fighting over beer, even though they're losing ololo

You ended the scene just when Ruki finally said something! '3'

UPDAATEEEE

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albinococonut23 January 19 2010, 03:55:17 UTC

Ahaha, I'm late again xD

YAYyyyyy! update! 8DDDD
I'm lovin all the hostility in the bar at the end there. Very cool Hahaha, I was totally guessing Saga too. kehehe He's just screaaaming villian in here. love it xD

Also, Kai as the chief is really awesome. Dunno why, but I'm lovin his character here... hahaha

12thgrave January 19 2010, 19:42:07 UTC

lol, better late than never? (Am I repeating myself? lol)
and yes, Saga is evil~~~
and I used Kai, cause he just seemed so calm and motherly in the band, so why not a firehouse XD

micukofelton February 6 2010, 20:00:04 UTC

ooh, I saw this only now! it was a great chapter ^^ I loved it. I can't wait to see what happens next! <3

12thgrave February 6 2010, 20:02:43 UTC

thanks for reading! I'm almost done with the next chapter... I've been sick and then exams... and the world hates me XD

micukofelton February 10 2010, 08:18:27 UTC

really, almost done with the new chap? yaaay! <3 *jumps around happily* I so wanna read it. ^^
oh and I know how it is, I had exams too. *nods*

12thgrave August 5 2011, 14:19:47 UTC

I know this is VERY late, but I'm starting this story again and I have written way more chapters than I have previously posted. I would love it if you wanted to start reading it again, there are a few small, but major, changes to the story. Hope you enjoy it again!!

kawasakininja February 9 2010, 13:30:44 UTC

Oh, man. I am crappy late for this. I am sorry ( ... )

12thgrave February 14 2010, 23:49:30 UTC

sorry for my late reply to this X( and thanks for noticing the flash back part XD if not, the [resent would be over sooner than the story is intended...

And duly noted, as also told by many friends, throwing people off track and teasing them is a habbit of mine in my writings.... But that is a good thing, no?

And by the 6th or 7th chapter, everyone will know why Reita is a meanie-meanie-poo face... And will probably agree with him XD Thank you for reading, comennting, and also recomending this to others! made my day when people told me you recomended this ^.^