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FIC: Divergence 20/?

Mar 09, 2010 12:40

( part twenty )

epic-fic:divergence, genre: alternate universe, pairing: kirk/spock, kid!kirk, fanfiction, kid!spock

Comments 23

larawander5 March 9 2010, 02:27:39 UTC

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nightshadow_t2 March 9 2010, 02:36:33 UTC

Oh dear. No, they can't break up Young Kirk and Spock. They're so suited and perfect and lovable. Bad older command crew. Go do your own relationships. Also, Nero is even scarier this go around.

13empress March 9 2010, 20:27:19 UTC

I didn't mean to give the impression they'd break them up. Though I suppose Bones is bound to say at one point that they're too young lol

angels3 March 9 2010, 02:47:03 UTC

Can I please crack all their noggins together. They're oblivious idiots the lot of them.

Can't wait for more.

margarks March 9 2010, 05:27:43 UTC

Divergence YAY!

I love how Spock and Kirk are talking about themselves through their younger selves, if that made any sense, lol. And both are just silly! I want to smack them upside the head and say - YES, THE YOUNGERS ARE SMARTER THAN YOU, GET WITH THE PROGRAM ALREADY!

And, I love the youngers reaction to each other when Spock wakes up, and the poor sad face Jimmy makes when Spock pushes him away :(

YAY!

13empress March 9 2010, 20:35:37 UTC

Actually that was my intention - for them to talk about themselves through their younger selves - so I'm glad you picked up on it :)

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13empress March 9 2010, 20:34:19 UTC

I'm glad you can't tell what the ending is going to be!! :D
Jim has an inside beat on Spock, that's for sure. Re Bones, he's a doctor and he's protective of little Jimmy so it's natural, due to well, obviously as an extension of his friendship with Jim. Re scaring them into avoiding each other - you're right as if Jimmy would allow it.