FIC: Divergence 24/27?

[13empress]

‘Helm, reverse course! Attack pattern bravo six-seven!’

Sweat poured off Hikaru Sulu but he shivered as if he was freezing. This couldn’t go on forever, he knew. They were smaller, more maneuverable, but the Romulans were relentless. The Enterprise doubled back, corkscrewing in for another attack. Bolts of bright green blazed from the Romulan vessel

Comments

[ice_is_blue]

*~~~O_O~~~*

*this is me, picking my jaw up off the floor and flailing*

Best chapter ever!

[13empress]

thank you for dropping your jaw :)

[ratcreature]

Great part. I really enjoyed the frantic pace.

[lanenk]

OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!

O.O

yeah, So I realized I had been holding my breath when I started getting dizzy about half way through... and then again at the end. >.<

[13empress]

You know I DO that too - I didn't realize till you mentioned it through cos I wrote it in chunks and you know, the effects were minimized!

[midasu]

Baby!Spock and Baby!Kirk - Everything bad in the world happens to you. Please don't suck them into Space. Also, this chapter is awesome!

[13empress]

I haven't done my job if I haven't hurt all the crew in SOME way physical or emotional or mental. That is my MO you should know that - don't worry, it's petit Kirk and Spocket, they rule.

[chironstar]

Holy cow the frantic pace and the thrilling action had me almost hyperventilating! I think this is one of the fastest paced chapters I've ever read - brilliant!

Go Winona! Mommy to the rescue! :D Can't wait to see what happens next! *thumbs up*

[13empress]

*offers oxygen bag* don't pass out yet there's more fun to be had!