prompt fill wip 1

Jun 19, 2010 23:11


Picture Prompt fill in progress

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stxi kink meme, pairing: kirk/spock, drafts, fanfiction

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anonymous June 19 2010, 15:08:32 UTC
So lovely! The uncertainty is totally believable.

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13empress June 19 2010, 20:59:23 UTC
Look it totally breaks my heart too - leaving their posts, but honestly I didn't say it was forever. I haven't actually thought about Spock's pov... I think he does actually want it, if only for a few years. Thanks, but damn I'm bad at domestic fic

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13empress June 19 2010, 21:19:43 UTC
OKAY NOW i'm all curious about the handful of potential reasons you have. Me, I was just thinking that Spock always wanted kids, just cos some people do, and he feels slightly offbalance not having progeny, birth or adopted, cos it's part the Vulcan identity to nurture something

I just planned [actually have written the settlement period] on covering the time on Vulcan, and children adopted or otherwise

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princesspine June 19 2010, 15:55:36 UTC
Oh god, I ADORE this. <3 I love Jim's emotions and reactions to the situation, and pretty much everyone else's too. I can't really give a better review right now because I'm doing a few things at once, but just know I think it's wonderful and can't wait for the next part, if there is one. c:

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13empress June 19 2010, 21:00:38 UTC
Yeah there is a new part and thanks, I'm glad you like it :D makes me feel better at least for writing at the speed of a snail

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xlcatloveress June 19 2010, 19:12:56 UTC
Absolutely lovely, engaging and hollerin' for 'more pleeeeeaaaaasssssseeeee'! I take it this is your try at mpreg that's been waiting in the wings for a while now? ;) Looking forward to seeing where you are taking it!

Little beta-ish nitpick: with glances shot at Spock like he’s steeling Jim away or something. => that should be 'stealing' :)

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13empress June 19 2010, 21:01:54 UTC
Actually this is sorta half-half
I am still not comfortable with mpreg honestly but this fic could be adoption fic too... cos the prompt was living on new vulcan being domestic with kids

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