FIC: Divergence 26b/28
USS Enterprise, Sickbay, year 2246
Spock woke up slowly, coming to consciousness in the dim night illumination of sickbay. His head ached terribly; it felt like someone was sitting on his chest, and his hands hurt. He tried to get up but found that he barely had the strength to lift his head. Trying to roll onto his side made him gasp for air, and a ( Read more... )
Spock woke up slowly, coming to consciousness in the dim night illumination of sickbay. His head ached terribly; it felt like someone was sitting on his chest, and his hands hurt. He tried to get up but found that he barely had the strength to lift his head. Trying to roll onto his side made him gasp for air, and a ( Read more... )
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yes err last 2 parts - I'm kind of still working on it
taking it easy cos I was very sick for over a month, trying to get my head back together currently (been slack but at least there's no possible death or destruction looming)
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thanks for the poke
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i *love* your winona kirk, and jim's interactions with her. likewise, big and little spock's discussion is so well characterized. poor spock- he's now one of three! so confusing!
the ending scene is perfect- well done!
can't wait for the next bit!
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Yeah you know my trials with the end scene - it got done through
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I find that I'm thrilled at mini Spock having the balls he does.
Looking forward to more.
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Yes, well slashy side of UST is about right :D They're just beginning their 'rapport.' I'm glad you didn't 'glaze over' and 'skim' that bit of Spock musing, because I was trying to set up and ease the story into a natural progression of further closeness in the next part. It would have seemed sudden to go from epic space battle, to lots of post-battle logistics, to 'OMG KISS ME' you know what I mean??
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