Poor Winona, so confused and protective of Jimmy getting stuck with an "emotionless" Vulcan. Kirk and Spock are going to be ok, they have a destiny together. :) Totally love it. And the part where everyone was freaking out about T'pau being involved was classic!
So I've just spent the last 6 hours or so reading this, I'm very glad it's the weekend! I love the whole premise of this story, seeing kid!Jim and kid!Spock is always fun, and they are adorable. I kind of love everything about this story. I can't wait to see how this ends!
Well this was a nice comment to wake up to on my birthday Thank you I'm glad you are enjoying the story But I sincerely hope you didn't stay up late or anything For me the last 6 hours would have been between 2 - 8 am lol
Well hey! Happy Birthday! The six hours for me were more like 12-6pm, though if I had started this story at night, there's a good chance I would've stayed up late to finish it. ;D! It's one of those stories where it's hard to stop because you have to know what's going to happen next, which really says a lot about how awesome your writing is. <3!
So I couldnt just read the last chapter without rereading the entire thing, and I've just come to the end of this one. AWWWW.
First of all, the battle scenes are some of the most intense writing I have ever read, fandom or otherwise. Seriously, you should take a huge bow.
Second, Jimmy and bb!Spock are about as adorable as kittens, puppies, and baby sloths combined. God, I love them so much.
Third, you have given no short shrift to any of the characters, and that's just really refreshing; seeing so much of the battle from Sulu's POV (especially his maneuvering the ship) was a literal thrill ride.
Finally, I love, love, LOVE the burgeoning romance you're portraying between adult Jim and Spock, and can't wait to see them (hopefully) together a little more in the final chapter.
Now I'm off to friend you so I don't miss a thing!
Thank you for commenting and enjoy the battle scenes - I LOVE SPACE BATTLES :D as Scotty would say, it's exciting! As for getting all the characters involved, well, I just write what I'd like to read :)
Thanks for the friend, I am working on part 28 at the moment :) [WORD is open right now in fact] and yes, there is a little scene between the adult Jim and Spock which I think you'll like.
Just read the whole thing in one go, and I loved it! Wanted to hug little!Kirk and little!Spock so much, and I love the way you portray their bond (psychic and psychological). Poor Winona, so overwhelmed (and yet handling it so well). And at least Jim wasn't on Tarsus? (Wait, what's happening on Tarsus now, then? Yikes...) I hope Spock and Jim (the bb ones) don't have to be separated in the fact of this new bond.
Awesome fic - can't wait for the next/last part! ♥
Sigh :) one go is the way this story is meant to be read but unfortunately I'm human and can only write so much in one go
I'm glad you've enjoyed the story - as for Tarsus, let's just stay that there's a mention coming up in the final part, and the new bond, it'll get satisfactorily dealt with (begun here in part 27 with Winona being clued in)
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(destiny lol oh yeah they have a "destiny" - sorry, um, inside joke, you'll understand when you read the ending)
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and I won't until it is officially the end lol
but CAPTAIN FINE IS FINE - why are you doing this to me??
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Thank you I'm glad you are enjoying the story
But I sincerely hope you didn't stay up late or anything
For me the last 6 hours would have been between 2 - 8 am lol
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So I couldnt just read the last chapter without rereading the entire thing, and I've just come to the end of this one. AWWWW.
First of all, the battle scenes are some of the most intense writing I have ever read, fandom or otherwise. Seriously, you should take a huge bow.
Second, Jimmy and bb!Spock are about as adorable as kittens, puppies, and baby sloths combined. God, I love them so much.
Third, you have given no short shrift to any of the characters, and that's just really refreshing; seeing so much of the battle from Sulu's POV (especially his maneuvering the ship) was a literal thrill ride.
Finally, I love, love, LOVE the burgeoning romance you're portraying between adult Jim and Spock, and can't wait to see them (hopefully) together a little more in the final chapter.
Now I'm off to friend you so I don't miss a thing!
Srsly, YOU'RE BRILLIANT
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Thanks for the friend, I am working on part 28 at the moment :) [WORD is open right now in fact] and yes, there is a little scene between the adult Jim and Spock which I think you'll like.
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Just read the whole thing in one go, and I loved it! Wanted to hug little!Kirk and little!Spock so much, and I love the way you portray their bond (psychic and psychological). Poor Winona, so overwhelmed (and yet handling it so well). And at least Jim wasn't on Tarsus? (Wait, what's happening on Tarsus now, then? Yikes...) I hope Spock and Jim (the bb ones) don't have to be separated in the fact of this new bond.
Awesome fic - can't wait for the next/last part! ♥
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I'm glad you've enjoyed the story - as for Tarsus, let's just stay that there's a mention coming up in the final part, and the new bond, it'll get satisfactorily dealt with (begun here in part 27 with Winona being clued in)
Thanks for commenting
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