「ENCANTAMIENTO INÚTIL」7; Dependence

Nov 29, 2008 11:28

Title: Encantamiento Inútil
Author: 148km
Fandom: alice nine. (also features Sugimoto Yoshinori and THE KIDDIE)
Pairing: Tora/Shou, one-sided Tora/Hiroto, Yoshinori/Nao
Rating: R
Genre: AU
Warnings: Vampires, RPS, male/male, violence, language, failure to secure a beta reader
Chapter: 7 [ archive ]
Summary: For once, Shou was glad that Tora was such a ( Read more... )

useless enchantment, fanfiction, alice nine., the kiddie, rps, sugimoto yoshinori

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eny_a November 30 2008, 02:28:52 UTC
I fucking love you 8DDDD
AHHHH you know THE KIDDIE is my second favourite band x3? Just after alice nine~
Gosh I loved this chpater, YoshixNao scene was amazing ♥ I didn't believe that he really had a crush on Nao!
Hiroto's story is so sad ;_;
Yusei baby is my favourite from the kiddie too, I just couldn't believe when I heard last ya-bay-yo, it was incredible to be hearing his cute voice x3
Well, ok, I'm fangirling way too much, all you need to know is that I love this fanfic, I really mised it, I loved this chapter, and I wish you luck with school too ♥

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148km December 1 2008, 03:42:33 UTC
THE KIDDIE is definitely one of my favorites, too! I was really happy to hear them on YA-BAY-YO!!, Yuusei's voice is so cute. ♥ I'm glad you like the Yoshinori/Nao, because I was a little concerned people might not like it.;; But now I'm reassured, thanks!

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angelzli November 30 2008, 02:40:34 UTC
im speachless, really. insanely awesome from the start! im so addicted i read all chapters from start to here in one sitting...i couldnt move. this...this...is EXACTLY my perfect fic, this has become my allllll time fave fic ive ever found! seriously, ur writing is awesome, ur characters are so surreal! the plot, the pairing, the EVERYTHING! -takes deep breath- i cant believe i didnt read this before -face palm- i just dont know what else to say lol im sooooo-a thousand more o's- looking forward to the next chap! ty so so much ~<3

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kapike November 30 2008, 06:21:02 UTC
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I'm so glad you updated. More than I can say. This deeper development between Nao and Yoshinori is getting more exciting! They are soooo freakin cute together! I'm glad that you are devoting some of your time to them and not all of it to Tora and Shou. I'm eager for the next chapter and what will happen. All the parts with the kitties made me laugh. So cute!

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148km December 1 2008, 03:44:56 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you feel that way about the Yoshinori/Nao, because I was worried that I was giving them too much time when this is supposedly a Tora/Shou fic... But I don't want them to be relegated to the backgorund, either, so hopefully I can keep up that balance.

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bauci November 30 2008, 08:01:08 UTC
Aww, reading this was great. I've fallen in love with Yoshinori/Nao, I think it's because it is WRITTEN with love. And I liked the part where Tora once 'needed Hiroto' the same as he does Shou now... (ToraPonnnn). It makes one wonder though, since we don't know what exactly happened, if Saga is right... Who -wouldn't- be jealous, who -would- share Tora?

It was fun and interesting, am looking forward for more!

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148km December 1 2008, 03:51:41 UTC
'Written with love' is probably the most accurate way to describe it, I can't possibly ship that pairing any harder. Is it that obvious? Haha... X) I was thinking before that I might be able to include some more in-depth backstory for Hiroto, but now I'm not sure I'll be able to make it work. I'm trying my best to keep Hiroto 3-dimensional and not just a 'bad guy.' Thanks for all your input!

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jelliepish November 30 2008, 14:29:35 UTC
Aaaaaggghh, I'm so happy when I saw this update!!!!!!(>___<)!!!!

I love the whole flow of the story....it isn't rush and the scene is changing at just the right time ^___^

I feel Tora's love (Is he even realize he's in love with Shou??) toward Shou becoming bigger everytime and with the promise of Saga and Hiroto's coming.....aah, I can't wait for the action!!! ^__^

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