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15lbpurebunny

Particles of Light, Chapter 19: I'm Only Here For This Moment

Sep 11, 2008 00:51

Title: Chatper 19 - I'm Only Here For This Moment
Rating: M
Disclaimer: I own nothing, I mean no harm, I'm not making any money from this
Spoilers: As always, potential light spoilers from Season One

A/N: I've included a link to the first chapter, if it's been a while since you read it, you might want to revisit it. Not a requirement, but might be fun ( Read more... )

fic, life, dani reese, charlie crews

Comments 7

citosol September 11 2008, 09:36:14 UTC

Yaaaaaaay!!!!! your update!! ^________^

I can't wait to go home and read it!!!!!

*_______*

(thanks bunny!)

If I smoked, I would need a cigarette citosol September 11 2008, 12:32:25 UTC

Oh.
My.
God.
If I read four time the chapter 18, I will read four thousand time this one.
Perfect in every single part.
Amazing. I love explicit sex and declaration of love between them. I love that Dani loves Charlie too.
And I love hear the "15ppb's touch" in these lines:
"Still slightly breathless, he sensed she was about to say something and propped himself up on one shoulder to face her in the darkness.
Her quiet, steady voice filled the room.
“So……you’re a REAL redhead, huh?”"
^________^ soooooo Bunny, and SOOOOOOO REESE!! ^___^

Oh how I love your Creese's story!

(and by now I'm not sure I'll be able to continue my own story...I feel like I'm betraying "your" Dani and Charlie and their real love, awwwwwww...they love each other! ^___^)

Re: If I smoked, I would need a cigarette 15lbpurebunny September 11 2008, 22:27:12 UTC

Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it!

quellthesurface September 12 2008, 04:55:33 UTC

Wonderful.

This, this is that moment. The one she wants to live in forever. Where body and mind are about to be imploded away, where that thing, that soul, breaks away like burnished bits of featherweight gold leaf. In this moment, everything she has and everything she is gets broken down, given up and fades away into ether. And, the freedom of that moment is unimaginable outside of it. She’s giving it all to him, all her power, all her control, every lost, mourned and bitter moment. Looking into his eyes, she feels it all leave her and float up, up through the ceiling to the stars, to the moon.
Definitely my favorite paragraph in the entire thing. Wonderful. :)

15lbpurebunny September 12 2008, 15:32:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it.

Funny, but that is MY favorite part, too. :-)

grimorie September 12 2008, 07:13:21 UTC

You have such a wonderful way of writing. Seriously love the way you describe things also... and the emotion that goes with it. Oh, and yes, did I mention hot? 'Cause it is.

“So……you’re a REAL redhead, huh?”

*snorts* Dani, that is so you.

15lbpurebunny September 12 2008, 15:31:40 UTC

"You have such a wonderful way of writing. Seriously love the way you describe things also... and the emotion that goes with it. Oh, and yes, did I mention hot? 'Cause it is."

Thank you so much,Grim. Coming from you I take that as an especially HUGE compliment. :-)

She would SO mess with his head and make a joke at his expense after all that.

She's baaaaack.