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Particles of Light, Chapter 21: Good

Oct 08, 2008 17:51

Title: Chapter 21- Good
Author: 15lbpurebunny
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine. Except, the stars in the sky. Those are mine.
Spoilers: Light spoilers though Season 1 are possible.

A/N: So, here we are. The end of the line. I really enjoyed writing this series, and enjoyed the feedback and thoughts that have been posted in comments and discussed ( Read more... )

lifefic, fic, life, dani reese, charlie crews

Comments 17

grimorie October 9 2008, 01:12:18 UTC

Whoo! congratulations and a perfect ending for them... reborn again and with LA spread before them. I feel so happy that they're happy. This has been a fantastic journey. Thank you for writing this.

15lbpurebunny October 9 2008, 01:14:59 UTC

Thank YOU for reading. And, all your support.

:)

adlervan October 9 2008, 01:31:59 UTC

are they not the cutest EVER??? they are, they so are. awwww, i'm so glad they're getting waffles! cute cute cute.

and i'm glad they've both found a happy place where they've found how they can complete each other. love that. because they do.

lovely perfect ending!! congratumalations!!

15lbpurebunny October 9 2008, 01:53:26 UTC

Thank you! They are so cute together, yes. Soo, so perfect in every way. They just FIT.

"lovly perfect ending!!"

Well, now, who do we have to thank for that, hmmmm?

omnie October 9 2008, 02:13:15 UTC

Ahhh. So good. I was having a pretty bad day and this totally made it better. I love this story so much.

"You look completely different from this side."

Ahahahahaha

15lbpurebunny October 9 2008, 20:20:06 UTC

Glad you liked reading this last chapter.

But, I'm sorry to hear you had a pretty bad day. :(

Rabbit hug!

speakfire October 12 2008, 18:21:11 UTC

It's over....

NOOOOOOOooooooooOOOOO!!

It's a great ending I totally agree, I love how they are both just.. with each other and taking comfort in that alone and it's very sweet and real. Cause sometimes that's what makes a good relationship great, those moments.

Next story plz kthxbye ;)

15lbpurebunny October 13 2008, 00:53:58 UTC

Awww, I'm glad you liked the story. I'm kind of sad to see it end. And, kind of relieved. Hmmmm, but mostly sad.

quellthesurface October 14 2008, 03:36:02 UTC

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I think you get the idea.
At least. I hope so.
Like really hope so.
Otherwise, I think you'll need an intervention of some sort.
Like the DL showing up at your door (do realize that as soon as you understand the above he will be shipped directly to me so I stay warm in the winter).

Anyways, it was a wonderful story, wonderful read, and there best be more at some point. Especially if citosol finishes hers soon. It will be quite the storyless area (at least for me) and then I'll be sad. And need something to cheer me up. Which is either more stories or the DL in person.

15lbpurebunny October 14 2008, 04:26:07 UTC

Well, the DL in person would certainly cheer a girl up.

Or, even a guy. Whatever.

But, I do have some more tricks up my sleeve where the fic is concerned. Just have to work them out a bit first. Hang in there. Life is on again in a few days and you can get your DL fix riiiight there!

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this, it really means a lot to me that you commented. REALLY. A LOT. :-)

And, I love, love, love the hearts!

Yaaay!

quellthesurface October 14 2008, 15:13:25 UTC

:D
GOOD! I'm excited for more!!!!

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