Particles of Light, Chapter 15: Chew, Swallow, Repeat

[15lbpurebunny]

Title: Chew, Swallow, Repeat
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, no harm intended
Spoiler: As always, light references to Season 1 possible
A/N: Short chapter, but keep thinking about where we're going next. I am.

Comments

[adlervan]

ooooooooooooooo! eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

"“Come in.” She gave a slight, almost imperceptible smirk, which made Charlie grin like an idiot." - sooo them!

"she surprised herself by reaching over and picking it off him with her fingers. He reacted by stopping chewing completely, and swallowing hard, making intense eye contact with her, orange eyebrows raised up high, until she looked away." - tingle alert!!!

"“It wasn’t a mistake.” His voice was cool, but low." - tingle alert #2!!! and i can't believe she said "I know"! reese, you devil!

gah, loved it!

[15lbpurebunny]

Hee! Glad you liked it! *big cheesey Charlie smile*

I can just hear the low, cool voice, can't you? Sigh.

Reese is a little devil. An adorable, cool little devil!

[adlervan]

i can hear the cool low voice, for sure!

there was a scene in an early episode of the X FIles in which mulder wiped some barbecue sauce off Scully's face and she stopped speaking and gave him this look - this chapter totally reminded me of that. and that's good, because M & S are the gold standard!! and the comparisons continue: Mulder the dark one/Dani the dark one cleaning food off Scully the orange one/Crews the orange one. howsa bout that!

[15lbpurebunny]

Ooh, cool! I watched a few eps, but never saw that one. Erm, even though it sounds like I totally ripped it off. Hee! *nervous laughter*

loved it!!!! ^_^ even if...

[citosol]

...unfortunately that kind of joke is a thing that italian people cannot understand. They aren't funny for us.

BUT
but

“Yep. Maybe this time won’t be a huge waste of time.”
that's a big promise too keep!!! ^____^

And I liked his cool, low voice.

...I smell that the next chapter will be "cool" too!

(thanks for posting this chapter, like I said to Adlervan "I'm addicted", I couldn't take no more!!! ^__^)

Re: loved it!!!! ^_^ even if...

[15lbpurebunny]

Glad you liked it.
The knock knock jokes are supposed to be bad. :-)

Re: loved it!!!! ^_^ even if...

[citosol]

oooh....well! I didn't know that!
^___^
They ARE bad!

Thanks for your explanation! ^____^

[grimorie]

You so don't have anything to worry about with this. The most things I love about our favorite detectives (that should be a T-shirt) is the moments when they're doing things like that: eating, talking about a case, its business and yet you can see how much they connect.

Dani picking the tortilla off his chin, oh, Dani he's grown on you a lot, huh? Like a third annoying mutant leg.

“Stakeout, Crews. At the beach. Not your treehouse.”

Ha! That is so Dani I can hear her say it even now.

[15lbpurebunny]

"That is so Dani I can hear her say it even now."
Yaaaaay!!!!

Glad you liked this one. I love that about them, too,just their casual interaction, even when it isn't quite so casual as they make it out to be. LOL

And, yes, we need a whole LINE of t-shirts to express our Dani/Charlie love.