perception - z berg/alex greenwald

Jun 11, 2010 01:07

perception
z berg/alex greenwald
r, 1733 words
for kink bingo, "sensation play" (though it may or may not actually fulfill the requirements? /o\)
For a moment there’s a sharp inhale from Alex, like he has something to say but the words are stuck in his throat, maybe - instead of speaking, he turns his face against Z’s thigh, high enough for her ( Read more... )

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eastdisease June 11 2010, 05:20:45 UTC
God damn!
The ending makes me cry, but ugh, you really captured both of them quite well. I loved how Z was all worried about things with Alex getting ruined but they end up laughing and being cute after the awkwardness.

And the descriptiveness! With Alex's hair! And the whole build up of the situation was really nice.

This has been a 1:21 in the morning comment. I tried, believe me.

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1842 June 11 2010, 05:26:03 UTC
i appreciate you trying ;)

i tried to focus on being descriptive of the, you know, sensations, but even if this doesn't work for kink bingo i had to post it to feel ~complete. it's a rare occasion that i actually finish something.

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selphiebooyaka June 11 2010, 05:59:38 UTC
ew those icons D:

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1842 June 11 2010, 06:06:16 UTC
i just uploaded mine!

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selphiebooyaka June 11 2010, 06:00:33 UTC
I ADORE THIS AND I WANT YOU TO WRITE MOAR PORN.

NOW!!!!

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1842 June 11 2010, 06:04:51 UTC
don't get sassy with me, greta.

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selphiebooyaka June 11 2010, 06:05:29 UTC
please? :(

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1842 June 11 2010, 06:07:15 UTC
maybe eventually.

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grapefruits June 11 2010, 12:39:17 UTC
Such a cockblock, Darren.

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1842 June 12 2010, 01:45:13 UTC
he was just trying to be a good man!

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justhush June 11 2010, 16:40:50 UTC
AHHH DARREN YOU SUCK A LOT

>:(

but i like this.

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1842 June 12 2010, 01:45:54 UTC
poor darren, everyone is mad at him~

thank you bb :')

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desfinado June 15 2010, 06:20:44 UTC
Mmmmm. Love the slow journey Alex takes up her thighs, the build of it, how it displaces her skirt... it was such a clear visual. And so cruelly interrupted!

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1842 June 15 2010, 06:25:40 UTC
it was so cruelly interrupted. i was tempted to leave that part out myself ;) thank you for commenting!

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