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on your trigger - z berg/ryan ross

Oct 24, 2010 17:01

on your trigger
z berg/ryan ross
nc-17, 1311 words
for kink bingo's "gun play" square (yes, the title is from "happiness is a warm gun" and no, i don't have any original thoughts). contains some D/s elements and also, obviously, gun play, though the gun is not loaded.
There’s no push and pull of power - it’s not his, even though it could be.

( “Gimme all your cash,” Z grins, teeth shining in the pale yellow lamplight. )

fic: complete, public

Comments 19

takkatakkatakka October 25 2010, 20:13:38 UTC

this is hot and i'm glad you wrote it and i would say more but commenting on porn makes me feel awkward, so. ♥

1842 October 25 2010, 22:40:47 UTC

commenting on anything makes me feel awkward. i get you. thanks~

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1842 October 30 2010, 03:34:25 UTC

thanks! it was a little weird trying to come up with a setting that wasn't completely out there (since i'm not very good with AUs) but i'm glad it worked

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1842 October 30 2010, 04:12:32 UTC

that's awesome to hear. i'm really interested in how people interact, so it probably makes sense it came out that way!

trundlebed December 20 2010, 09:39:58 UTC

That was genuinely one of the hottest things I've read in months, I didn't even know I had a gunplay kink before but damn. Damn. *_______* This was excellent, thank you!

1842 December 20 2010, 19:44:05 UTC

thank you so much! i wasn't really expecting to enjoy this prompt as much as i did, actually, so i kind of know how you feel ;)