Temptation challenge, by awabubbles

[awabubbles]

Title: Bluffin' With Mah Muffin
Rating: Blue Cortina
Characters: Gene/Sam, Vince, Clive
Word count: 646
Notes: Speaking of using lyrics for titles...
Summary: Gene wants a smoke during a poker game. Sam makes him want something else.

Comments

[petronelle]

This reached into the viscera and *tweaked.* Talk about positive reinforcement for resisting a stimulus, there. ;)

[awabubbles]

Thanks! also:
This reached into the viscera and *tweaked.*
That sounds so dreadfully naughty ♥

[petronelle]

It got me more in the gut than anywhere exciting--though when I went and looked up viscera to be sure I hadn't implied something naughty, I learned that the singular is viscus, so that was time well spent. ;)

[margo_kim]

Well. That certainly is one way to convey the appeal of smoking. Very hot fic. I love the description of lighting up, particularly how it doesn't actually sound that good, but Gene's wanting makes it seem so. And, of course, tricky Sam. He's such a wonderful bastard sometimes.

[awabubbles]

I keep writing Gene desperately wanting things, either because I enjoy torturing him or because he has a grocery list of vices.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[saintvic]

Really liked this and the interaction between Sam and Gene.

[awabubbles]

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting!