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1985laurie

Hush Part Five!

Jun 14, 2007 16:04

Here it is...Part Five!
I must say, I'm pretty disappointed - but I've slaved over it for too long to try and worry about it anymore!

If that hasn't put you off...

House groaned, swallowing thickly against another wave of nausea threatened to drown him. He couldn’t recall how long it had been since they’d pushed the Narcan through him, he’d lost ( Read more... )

hush, sick, hurt, house

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rosettastone_d June 14 2007, 15:57:43 UTC

Eeeee! Thank God Wilson got there at last. Can't wait until House tells him what really happened. Methinks Wilsie's head may explode. :D

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1985laurie June 14 2007, 16:06:36 UTC

Now that's an interesting thought...hehe

Coming next - Wilson crashes car (because you just can't drive with an exploded head!) accompanying music by Cheap Trick with 'You Drive, I'll Steer'...(as hummed by House as he desperately attempts to continue the journey with headless!Wilson in the driver's seat.)

Did I happen to mention it's hot here? My brain is turning into mush! Hence the utter randomness of this reply...'cos I'm usually so very coherant. *snort*

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rosettastone_d June 14 2007, 16:08:20 UTC

It's alright for some - down here in Devon (this morning) and Dorset (this afternoon and now) it's been raining just about all day.

Headless!Wilson... now someone should draw that. I can't draw, but SOMEONE should. :D And I look forward to the next installment greatly. *struggles to contain excitement*

1985laurie June 14 2007, 16:16:29 UTC

Argh! Don't say that - I'm going camping in Bude in two weeks (I'm aware it's not in Devon or Dorset - but Cornwall's close enough, eh?)!
Must just be sunny in Norfolk, same thing happened last weekend...I got sunburnt and everything...it was great ;p

Next part coming quicker than this part did...!

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diysheep June 14 2007, 18:23:07 UTC

Loving this - clever idea and fun.

1985laurie June 14 2007, 18:45:43 UTC

Cool, glad you think so.

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bmax67 June 14 2007, 19:05:09 UTC

“Jesus, Wilson!” House hissed miserably, recovering slightly from the retching, “if I wanted to be rescued by Columbo, there’s a good chance I would have called him!”

*snicker*

I loved that line. :D

Great chapter! Full of suspense and raised some questions about the goings on at this little hospital in the middle of nowhere.

Yay for SuperWilson!

1985laurie June 14 2007, 20:22:37 UTC

Hehe

I'm sure the good people of Warren hospital aren't really sadistically challenged! Well, you never know...

Glad you liked the Columbo line too ;)

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brandy71 June 14 2007, 19:27:55 UTC

Well that got my heart-rate up! You sure know how to write an exciting story. Can't wait for the next installment *hint-hint*.

1985laurie June 14 2007, 20:25:16 UTC

I'll be sure to update much quicker than last time - I promise!

Exciting? Really? Cool.

Thanks!

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houseism June 15 2007, 00:40:47 UTC

I just thought I would let you know... that you are officially my favorite fanfiction writer. You just do everything right for me. You write the angst, and you do it just the way I like it.

And you keep to character. A lot of writers are great at angst but make House too weepy or even more bastardly than he is.

I squee when I see that you've updated!

houseism June 15 2007, 00:42:28 UTC

And btw I keep track of ALL the good fic... I have a huge list... and keep track on TWoP and so on... And you're the best. :D

1985laurie June 15 2007, 07:57:01 UTC

Weepy!House will never find his way into my fics...nor will Weepy!Wilson...Weepy!Cuddy?...well, that's a tough one!

I squee when you say nice stuff like that to me - especially about me being your fav...that's just so cool ;)

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