Comments | 1_900_mimicry: Leisurely we glide (Dick/Tim, NC-17, DCU)

1_900_mimicry

Leisurely we glide (Dick/Tim, NC-17, DCU)

Apr 22, 2007 03:57

Title: Leisurely we glide
Author: Mimic
Characters/Pairings: Dick/Tim
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't play for keeps. DC owns them.
Notes: Title from Lewis Carroll's "Alice in Wonderland". Fic for Pixie, who has awesomely agreed to make me Bucky icons in return for porn.
Feedback: Ahh, yes.
Word Count: 3200

( I've been told I'm a good listener. )

dick, tim, slash, fic

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1_900_mimicry April 24 2007, 01:13:16 UTC

They're happy! Happy I say!

Thanks. ♥

trascendenza April 23 2007, 20:10:53 UTC

Eeeee yummeh! I just love the way you write these two, all dark and scrummy and... so much witholding, even as they throw themselves into the exuberance of violence and sex.

trascendenza April 23 2007, 20:13:27 UTC

Oh, duh, and this line:

“Not anyone, *you*. And you know it works.”
!!!! Something about the way he says that is pure sex to me. I also liked the comparison about kissing being like drowning and choking... very accurate.

1_900_mimicry April 24 2007, 01:14:57 UTC

The batboys don't know how to be anything other than repressed, but they try. ;)

Thank you. I wasn't quite sure about that line when I was editing, nice to know it worked out. Everything Dick says can be interpreted as sex.

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1_900_mimicry May 18 2007, 21:52:13 UTC

That Tim still feels like he's the one observing, just playing this big game like he used to. So nicely done.

I like to think it mostly just comes up when he's around Dick. Watching him, he can't help thinking that's *all* he's doing.

Oh man. That's hard and harsh and so right. Tim always fills the hole and void that's left when Dick does something else or is going through his own stuff. You write the boys so well.

They're brother, and no matter what they're doing that family-thing is going to shine through.

Thank you! They make me very happy.

You write such good porn. It is hot and amazing and still so in character.

And again, thank you. *blush*

Dick doesn't want to talk so he throws himself at Tim like a sex bomb!

Hahaha. Now why isn't *that* my summary for this fic?

rubynye May 22 2007, 20:16:36 UTC

Goodness, how did I miss this lovely story? Oh, Dick, and oh, Tim. And oh, birdboys.

1_900_mimicry May 22 2007, 20:41:39 UTC

I could write them forever, especially like this.

ladybugkay May 26 2007, 02:59:18 UTC

Love, love, love this! *showers you with roses and chocolate*

Poor Tim lamenting his camera; those were the days, when he could stalk Dick to his heart's content. How I love Dick/Tim. So beautifully written.

My favourite line is the one about the line between following Dick and having to hunt for hours to *find* Dick--that's exactly how I see the both of them. Such pretty, pretty words for the pretty, pretty birdies.