Comments | 1_900_mimicry: Mysteries (Tim, Bernard, G, Robin)

1_900_mimicry

Mysteries (Tim, Bernard, G, Robin)

May 17, 2007 18:07

Title: Mysteries
Author: Mimic
Characters/Pairings: Tim, Bernard
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't play for keeps. DC owns them.
Notes: I want to call this a bit of an exercise, just a snip of school life for one Tim Drake.
Feedback: Love it.
Word Count: 600

( “Why would I do that? After all, you just insulted me, stole my food, and demanded I help you.” )

tim, bernard, fic, gen

Comments 15

bumpkin_is May 18 2007, 02:14:33 UTC

LOL, you just gotta love the Bernard - he's great, and just off enough to set Tim on his ear. *g* Nice little foray into Tim's mundane life, thanks for sharing.

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect

1_900_mimicry May 18 2007, 02:18:58 UTC

Bernard is one of my favorite, definitely.

Thanks for reading!

sadasi May 18 2007, 06:38:14 UTC

Mnnnnn! *squishes*
I love your Bernard, he's perfect.
Now if you could just get him into eggplant...

1_900_mimicry May 18 2007, 09:35:20 UTC

That would make me unbelievably happy.

Thank you!

darkdanc3r May 18 2007, 06:43:31 UTC

i love these little looks into hero's everyday lives. reminds us that they are - most of them - human.

1_900_mimicry May 18 2007, 09:35:59 UTC

They're really fun to write. Especially Tim, who works so hard at being a Bat.

in_excelsis_dea May 18 2007, 10:03:31 UTC

I love Bernard as a character. He's so in-your-face, yet in a nice way. And the line about Bernard always being able to sneak up on Tim is great.

1_900_mimicry May 18 2007, 10:18:17 UTC

Thank you. He really is lots of fun.

naughty__pixie May 18 2007, 12:33:22 UTC

HA!!! My favorite little freakpair!

He has yet to decide whether this is due to any of Bernard’s talents, or merely the fact that Tim’s subconscious does not recognize him as a threat until he is, quite literally, in his face.

and *really* Timmy! you should know better than to ignore(and not know every single move) Bernard makes. Silly little Bat.

Tim looks down at his shirt, not realizing until he looks back up that’s exactly what Bernard wanted him to do. His entire game is throwing those around him off balance.

as only Bernard can do, yes.

“I don’t have anything with short sleeves,” he replies.

He doesn’t actually count his costume when answering.

LOL!!! I am not even sure Bernard was talking about *this* shirt.

“Why would I do that? After all, you just insulted me, stole my food, and demanded I help you.”

....because Bernard is still being merciful and going easy on him?

Bernard steals his zesti this time, and Tim debates internally for half a minute before letting it pass. see? this is how we know its love. ( ... )

1_900_mimicry May 18 2007, 21:09:45 UTC

I really do love your reviews. I mean, you totally didn't *have* to seeing as you already audienced for me.

You always scream sequel at me. I sort of take it for granted now. Write fic. Post fic. Pixie screams sequel. I deny. More screaming. Will power fails.

naughty__pixie May 19 2007, 03:01:00 UTC

You always scream sequel at me. I sort of take it for granted now. Write fic. Post fic. Pixie screams sequel. I deny. More screaming. Will power fails.

oh good. the conditioning is working right on schedule then. *grins*

and now we work on skipping the "I deny" part entirely.